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the_loner_23
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0 posted 2003-11-02 03:53 PM


The girl screamed up at God,
"Why me? Why am I meant to be alone?
Why can't I find one person to love me as I am?
Why can't I foind someone to listen
When I need to explode?"

Then a voice came down and said,
"My child, you are not meant to be alone.
Just some men don't know how to treat you right
And your temper alone scares them away."

Then the girl looked up in the sky and said,
"Dear God, I tried my best to keep it together
But in the end I just got fed up
And I blew it. But I saw it coming anyways."

God raised his voice and said,
"My child, If your destiny was to be alone
Then you wouldn't have found the young man
In which you said you blew it with
Now calm down and pray that one day
Evreything is gonna be okay again."

The girl replied to her God,
"God I have prayed
But when will things get better?
I am tired of praying for something
That most likely won't ever happen."

God looked down upon the girl and responded,
"If you give up my child
Then you may never be happy again
Just pray incessently
And you may be happy again"

The girl said to her God,
"God I will do as you speak
And maybe in the future
My prayers my be answered
But I hate the wait."

Then God finally said to the girl,
"My child just keep up with prayer
And one day
Everything is gonna be alright again."



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Mistletoe Angel
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1 posted 2003-11-02 04:03 PM




(smiles) That's the spirit, yay! (big angel hugs) Keep the faith, my friend, if you book your dreams and desires, they will come! God Bless You, we all love you so much! You have such a beautiful heart, sweet Julie, thank you for sharing!



May love and light always shine upon you!

Love,
Noah Eaton

I don't need no proof when it comes to God and truth
I can see the sun set and I perceive

***Live***

Margherita
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since 2003-02-08
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2 posted 2003-11-02 05:30 PM


Beautiful, inspired dialogue!
No, you are not alone.
Love and hugs. Margherita

SharaRose
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3 posted 2003-11-02 05:36 PM


*S*M*I*L*E*S*..Keep praying...Sounds like the voice wants what's best for you right around the corner.
Love,
Terri~

vandana
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4 posted 2003-11-02 05:59 PM


enjoyed this read
ThunderMage
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5 posted 2003-11-02 06:10 PM


Nobody's ever alone - you still have a friend to talk to.

What is life without poetry and adventure?
"Little sister" is just another way of saying "Guardian Angel"!

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