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Mistletoe Angel
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0 posted 2003-10-29 05:52 PM




(Ha y'all doin' today? Thank you so much for your warm birthday wishes and hugs for me, you are all friends in my heart forever! (angel hugs for everyone) Here's a feel-goodin'! )

Under New Management
By: Noah Eaton
10/28/03

From this jail I’ve just made bail
Ridin’ with the wind in my sails
You see Jesus too was a jailbird
And there’s so much from Him I’ve learned
Cuz once I prayed to the Devil
Let him claim possession of my blues-infused soul
Now He’s busted those chains
And I’ve made my lucky escape…

Now I’m rollin’ down the interstate
Lookin’ for that bundle of your grace
Lord, my doors are open wide
You're always welcome to walk by my side
Cuz now I always pass the devil on the street
He can never afford to pay me the lease
Hey God, come right in
Cuz my heart's under new management

Now I’m sittin’ up front on this Greyhound
Makin’ my ride on this honky-tonk merry-go-round
I’ve got me a six-piece band and a high falootin’ crowd
Fallin’ never felt so right, for cryin’ out loud
I’m rollin’ the wheel and shiftin’ the gears
He'll keep gettin' shotgun through all these wonder years
Cuz every show I have He’s my guest of honor
He’s my rootin-tootin’ host who’s got all the power

Now I’m rollin’ down the interstate
Lookin’ for that bundle of your grace
Lord, my doors are open wide
You're always welcome to walk by my side
Cuz now I always pass the devil on the street
He can never afford to pay me the lease
Hey God, come right in
Cuz my heart's under new management

I’m puttin’ up a clearance sale
All my sins must go
Lord, I'll always be followin' you
Followin' you till I come back home

Now I’m rollin’ down the interstate
Lookin’ for that bundle of your grace
Lord, my doors are open wide
You're always welcome to walk by my side
Cuz now I always pass the devil on the street
He can never afford to pay me the lease
Hey God, come right in
Cuz my heart's under new management

Come right in,
cuz my heart's under new management




I don't need no proof when it comes to God and truth
I can see the sun set and I perceive

***Live***

[This message has been edited by Mistletoe Angel (10-29-2003 05:53 PM).]

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1 posted 2003-10-29 06:04 PM


NOAH!!!!!

I LOVE this!!

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2 posted 2003-10-29 06:39 PM


nice read
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3 posted 2003-10-29 06:42 PM


So positive and up-beat! You've got God's rhythm in your soul ~ and soles! lol

Enjoyed the spirit of this right write!

Loving hugs,
EA
P.S. This would make a great song! --and I loved the title and how it was woven through the write!

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4 posted 2003-10-29 07:13 PM


positively one of the best I've read...love it :-)

Ya know what they say.  Curiosity salted the snail.

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5 posted 2003-10-29 08:56 PM


Love it angel...what key do I play it in?
>>>ice/ford<<<


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6 posted 2003-10-29 09:27 PM


This is amazing!! I loved every single word. It flowed great and I could hear it in my head as a song. You should put some music to it and see how it sounds. Thank you so much for sharing this with us.
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7 posted 2003-10-31 03:38 AM


Under the right management...James
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8 posted 2003-10-31 04:53 AM


big smile
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9 posted 2003-11-01 08:26 PM


I can almost hear you picking your guitar to this one Noah!!!  Well put and Well Done my friend!  I love the way you wrote this.

Sherry


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10 posted 2003-11-01 08:35 PM


I absolutly love this!!

" So let us then try to climb the mountain, not by stepping on what is below us, but to pull us up at what is above us, for my part at the stars; amen

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11 posted 2003-11-01 10:33 PM


so good to see you happy... hugsssss dear noah


Lauren~

Will the wind ever remember the names
it has blown in the past with
its crutch its old age and its widsom
it whispers no this won't be the last

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12 posted 2003-11-02 06:25 PM


Your doors are wide open and He is walking by your side for sure.
Wonderful write.
Love and hugs. Margherita

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13 posted 2003-11-02 06:29 PM


Noah...you've got the right up-beat!
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