Open Poetry #29 |
Under New Management |
Mistletoe Angel
since 2000-12-17
Posts 32816Portland, Oregon |
(Ha y'all doin' today? Thank you so much for your warm birthday wishes and hugs for me, you are all friends in my heart forever! (angel hugs for everyone) Here's a feel-goodin'! ) Under New Management By: Noah Eaton 10/28/03 From this jail I’ve just made bail Ridin’ with the wind in my sails You see Jesus too was a jailbird And there’s so much from Him I’ve learned Cuz once I prayed to the Devil Let him claim possession of my blues-infused soul Now He’s busted those chains And I’ve made my lucky escape… Now I’m rollin’ down the interstate Lookin’ for that bundle of your grace Lord, my doors are open wide You're always welcome to walk by my side Cuz now I always pass the devil on the street He can never afford to pay me the lease Hey God, come right in Cuz my heart's under new management Now I’m sittin’ up front on this Greyhound Makin’ my ride on this honky-tonk merry-go-round I’ve got me a six-piece band and a high falootin’ crowd Fallin’ never felt so right, for cryin’ out loud I’m rollin’ the wheel and shiftin’ the gears He'll keep gettin' shotgun through all these wonder years Cuz every show I have He’s my guest of honor He’s my rootin-tootin’ host who’s got all the power Now I’m rollin’ down the interstate Lookin’ for that bundle of your grace Lord, my doors are open wide You're always welcome to walk by my side Cuz now I always pass the devil on the street He can never afford to pay me the lease Hey God, come right in Cuz my heart's under new management I’m puttin’ up a clearance sale All my sins must go Lord, I'll always be followin' you Followin' you till I come back home Now I’m rollin’ down the interstate Lookin’ for that bundle of your grace Lord, my doors are open wide You're always welcome to walk by my side Cuz now I always pass the devil on the street He can never afford to pay me the lease Hey God, come right in Cuz my heart's under new management Come right in, cuz my heart's under new management I don't need no proof when it comes to God and truth I can see the sun set and I perceive ***Live*** [This message has been edited by Mistletoe Angel (10-29-2003 05:53 PM).] |
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SEA
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Member Seraphic
since 2000-01-18
Posts 22676with you |
NOAH!!!!! I LOVE this!! |
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vandana
since 1999-10-22
Posts 10463USA |
nice read |
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Earth Angel Member Empyrean
since 2002-08-27
Posts 40215Realms of Light |
So positive and up-beat! You've got God's rhythm in your soul ~ and soles! lol Enjoyed the spirit of this right write! Loving hugs, EA P.S. This would make a great song! --and I loved the title and how it was woven through the write! |
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KristieSue
since 2003-01-31
Posts 1460PA, US |
positively one of the best I've read...love it :-) Ya know what they say. Curiosity salted the snail. |
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ice Member Elite
since 2003-05-17
Posts 3404Pennsylvania |
Love it angel...what key do I play it in? >>>ice/ford<<< |
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whispering wind Junior Member
since 2003-08-18
Posts 45 |
This is amazing!! I loved every single word. It flowed great and I could hear it in my head as a song. You should put some music to it and see how it sounds. Thank you so much for sharing this with us. |
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JamesMichael Member Empyrean
since 1999-11-16
Posts 33336Kapolei, Hawaii, USA |
Under the right management...James |
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passing shadows Member Empyrean
since 1999-08-26
Posts 45577displaced |
big smile |
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Magicmystery Senior Member
since 2002-02-13
Posts 821Windsor, Ontario, Canada |
I can almost hear you picking your guitar to this one Noah!!! Well put and Well Done my friend! I love the way you wrote this. Sherry
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C_ROK06 Junior Member
since 2003-10-23
Posts 49 |
I absolutly love this!! " So let us then try to climb the mountain, not by stepping on what is below us, but to pull us up at what is above us, for my part at the stars; amen |
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Greeneyes
since 2000-09-09
Posts 9903In Your Poetic Mind |
so good to see you happy... hugsssss dear noah Lauren~ Will the wind ever remember the names |
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Margherita Member Seraphic
since 2003-02-08
Posts 22236Eternity |
Your doors are wide open and He is walking by your side for sure. Wonderful write. Love and hugs. Margherita |
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Martie
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Member Empyrean
since 1999-09-21
Posts 28049California |
Noah...you've got the right up-beat! |
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