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the_loner_23
Member Ascendant

since 2002-06-08

Posts 5479
Jacksonville, Florida, USA

0 posted 2003-11-02 02:28 PM

The angels look down upon the humans
And watch as they suffer
One man in particular is suffering
From the indecisions of life
His presant girlfriend
Who is now his ex
Gave him a reason to move on
Now he waits on an important
telephone call from the girl
he has now chosen to be the one
To marry him

The angels looked into his ex's heart
And could tell it was hard for her to part
With a man she had loved for 2 years
One angel says to the other,
"How are we gonna fix this tangled mess
And not get her ex-boyfriend ticked?"

Then God looked down on the situation
And he said, "Make them friends.
And see if that makes everyone happy."
But the angels replied back,
"it looks like it is off to an icy start.
Will they ever trust each other again
Only if they are friends?"

God looked at his angels and replied,
"That is up to them. I cannot decide for them.
They will either make it work
Or they will in the end give up on it."

The angels looked down at them again and said to God,
"We will pray that they work their differences out.
She needs to work on that temper
And he needs to work on undersatanding how people
Feel without blowing up at them and taking the easy way out."

Then God looked down at the humans in question and said,
"Give it time and everything will work out.
Even if it takes months or even years
Something is bound to work out."

Then the angels with God looked down at them
And they said, "God they were perfect for 2 years
What ruined it all?"

Then God answered, "They just had to take a break from it all.
They needed to know if they were perfect for each other or not.
And they both took a fall."

The angels started to weep with dispear
And God said to them,
"One day everything will be back to normal
They may just be friends
But at least both of them will be happy."

But one of the angels said,
"I was the one who brought them together
I thought they would work
But I guess I was wrong
And now that girl has a broken heart."

God put his hand on the angels shoulder and said,
"you tried your best
But not all things work out
As you have planned
Take this to with a grain of salt
And maybe in the future you will see it wasn't your fault."

They watched as boy and girl walked away
One happy he got his way
The other still blue to this day

The angels still watch over them both
But God told them,
"Don't get in the way of what the future might bring."
And then he winked at the angels
And walked away

Jason Lyle
Senior Member

since 2003-02-07

Posts 1438
With my darkling

1 posted 2003-11-02 02:33 PM

Sounds like just what he would say.Nice write.

Jason

Mistletoe Angel

Member Empyrean

since 2000-12-17

Posts 32816
Portland, Oregon

2 posted 2003-11-02 02:37 PM

(big hugggssssssss) I am so happy you are thinking this way, sweet friend, take His advice and start all over again and begin by loving yourself then find someone who is worthy of you! (sigh) God Bless You, sweet friend, we all love you so much! You have such a beautiful heart, sweet Julie, thank you for sharing!

May love and light always shine upon you!

Love,
Noah Eaton

I don't need no proof when it comes to God and truth
I can see the sun set and I perceive

***Live***

Kellie_Cantrell
Senior Member

since 2002-05-22

Posts 1667
New York

3 posted 2003-11-02 02:38 PM

Julie,
this is incredibly amazing. I am amazed how you can write so well about your experiences with Liam, and that you are taking your troubles up with God. It takes a strong person to write this poem. and a stronger one with courage to post it as you have. You are strong bold faithful and courageous. May things go well for you.