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0 posted 2003-11-02 01:27 PM






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If freedom calls you
Or your heart begs you to leave
No need to explain
My love would spread wide it's wings
In gesture of safe passage


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Chris Barker
November 2003
~~~



© Copyright 2003 Chris Barker - All Rights Reserved
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1 posted 2003-11-02 01:32 PM




(smiles) Awwwwwwwww, this is a beautiful wish of love, sweet friend, love can never make hearts drift away as it is the most lively quality of all! (kiss on cheek) God Bless You, sweet friend, we all love you so much! You have such a beautiful heart, sweet Chris, thank you for sharing!



May love and light always shine upon you!

Love,
Noah Eaton

I don't need no proof when it comes to God and truth
I can see the sun set and I perceive

***Live***

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2 posted 2003-11-02 01:54 PM


Very nicely said Chris....true kindness and
compassion resides within.

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3 posted 2003-11-02 03:01 PM


This tender beauty touches my heart. *S*
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4 posted 2003-11-02 03:04 PM


Chris....Freedom is a gift of love!  Hugs!
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5 posted 2003-11-02 03:21 PM


Noah, Magnus, Ruth & Martie, thankyou all so much for reading and commenting.

Let your life lightly dance on the edges of Time like dew on the tip of a leaf. -Tagore



    

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6 posted 2003-11-02 04:28 PM


Beautifully written Chris...
Sorry I was so long in getting to this...
back to the couch.
~Hugs & miss ya~

~Time has cast a spell on you,
  So you won't ever forget me~

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7 posted 2003-11-02 05:57 PM


nice
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8 posted 2003-11-02 07:36 PM


Many thanks Nancylee & vandana

Let your life lightly dance on the edges of Time like dew on the tip of a leaf. -Tagore



    

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9 posted 2003-11-03 03:43 AM


sometimes ya gotta let go to know what ya got

good stuff

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10 posted 2003-11-03 06:51 AM



Oh, this has so many levels, Chris...
so very good to have you back with us!

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