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The Fall
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The Fall |
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Logan Senior Member
since 2001-05-28
Posts 1641Arkansas |
Soft rain cascading from oak, beech and elm In a myriad swirl of rainbow waterfall To carpet the softness of nature’s realm With grasses sinking in the depths of autumns call While far above can be heard the hail Of Vs stretching their wings to their drive to fly The snows, the blues and Canadians in their sail Against brilliant blue with sun reflect in God’s sky Yellow butterflies sipping the last nectar of the bloom With the small furred animals gathering for what is to come Mingled with the soft of breeze with its special perfume And birds do harvest the last sweet of the plum And in reflect, one can only smile For all the paths leading to just this time This one moment to feel, and linger awhile In the briefness of sight and feel sublime |
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Midnitesun
since 2001-05-18
Posts 28647Gaia |
thank you, Logan for letting me linger within this beautiful moment |
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Martie
Moderator
Member Empyrean
since 1999-09-21
Posts 28049California |
Logan It is one thing to have vision, and quite another thing to see. Thank you for sharing what you see in the fall with this beauiful poem. |
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nakdthoughts Member Laureate
since 2000-10-29
Posts 19200Between the Lines |
And in reflect, one can only smile For all the paths leading to just this time This one moment to feel, and linger awhile In the briefness of sight and feel sublime very beautiful Logan..we are having an Indian summer 80 degrees yesterday and very warm today..I am out there mowing and mulching leaves and enjoying the colors and warmth of Fall...and the thoughts that run through my mind .. M |
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passing shadows Member Empyrean
since 1999-08-26
Posts 45577displaced |
yes...sigh |
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Magnus
since 2001-10-10
Posts 14135South Carolina, USA |
Very nicely written Logan....I could see the V of the geese, the other creatures all hoarding for that time which sits around the corner, waiting to knock chillingly. Too soon, I might add. |
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SharaRose Member Elite
since 2003-07-19
Posts 2501Somewhere out there~ |
I could see the little squirrels scurrying, and the birds feeding off the plums, and smell the fragrance of the flowers in their last bloom..the V formation, and here it's 84 all week so, it's still very warm here. This was amazing!!! Thanks for sharing this last little touch of the season.  Love, Terri~  [This message has been edited by SharaRose (11-02-2003 12:51 PM).] |
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Logan Senior Member
since 2001-05-28
Posts 1641Arkansas |
Kacy, very gentle smile, thank you for lingering, for it is always so nice to have you here Ahhh, Martie, what a nice thing to say and I appreciate the thoughts..very gentle smile Maureen, very gentle smile. Thank you for taking the brake from the yard to read this. That is what I should be doing Dix, thank you for the read and the thought..very gentle smile Magnus, thank you for being here, and yes, all too soon this will pass..but then..we will see the Spring once more..gentle smile Terry..no, thank you for being here for the read and I am glad you enjoyed...very gentle smile |
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Mistletoe Angel 
since 2000-12-17
Posts 32816Portland, Oregon |
 (smiles) Awwwwwwwwww, this made me smile, sweet friend, this had me imagining the beautiful wilderness here in Colorado with hummingbirds and flickers flittering about and deer out on the alpine meadow! (big hugggsssssss) God Bless You, sweet friend, we all love you so much! You have such a beautiful heart, sweet Logan, thank you for sharing!  May love and light always shine upon you! Love, Noah Eaton I don't need no proof when it comes to God and truth |
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Margherita Member Seraphic
since 2003-02-08
Posts 22236Eternity |
You have captured this moment beautifully. A wonderful write. Love, Margherita  |
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rambling_words Junior Member
since 2003-10-29
Posts 44London, Ontario, Canada |
What a description of nature. Beautiful. I loved the Canadian mention also. John |
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Enchantress Member Empyrean
since 2001-08-14
Posts 35113Canada eh. |
"And in reflect, one can only smile For all the paths leading to just this time This one moment to feel, and linger awhile In the briefness of sight and feel sublime" Thank you dear keeper for giving me cause to linger today... Tis good for the body, mind, and spirit. ~Soft smiles & gentle hugs, Leighgirl~ ~Time has cast a spell on you, |
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Sunshine
Administrator
Member Empyrean
since 1999-06-25
Posts 63354Listening to every heart |
Comes the time of year that we greet each day with a smile, a wave, and we're on our way... |
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