Open Poetry #29 |
Feelings Linger |
Happy Poet Junior Member
since 2003-10-29
Posts 10 |
she hasn't forgotten feelings of anticipation as the candles burn to her astonishment she begins to feel sad and she won't believe it's all over |
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Mistletoe Angel
since 2000-12-17
Posts 32816Portland, Oregon |
(big hugggssssssss) This is a sad but beautiful poem, sweet friend, I only wish anticipation can always be monitored somehow and then we can believe far more when waiting! (sigh) God Bless You, sweet friend, we all love you so much! You have such a beautiful heart, sweet friend, thank you for sharing! May love and light always shine upon you! Love, Noah Eaton I don't need no proof when it comes to God and truth |
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BluesSerenade Member Patricius
since 2001-10-23
Posts 10549By the Seaside |
It's not judgment time, but it's a close second. Saddness can be all consuming, only if we let it be. (oh yea, take it from me) Your poem is heartfelt, HP. *Much enjoyed* |
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Pilgrimage Member Elite
since 2001-12-04
Posts 3945Texas, USA |
Sometimes it's over before it starts. At least she can remember the good times. Nan (Pilgrim variety) |
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passing shadows Member Empyrean
since 1999-08-26
Posts 45577displaced |
you know me, don't you? yeah, this hit home |
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Ratleader
since 2003-01-23
Posts 7026Visiting Earth on a Guest Pass |
I hope she never forgets -- and never regrets. Life's too short for either. ~~(¸¸¸¸ºº> ~~(¸¸¸¸ºº> ~~(¸¸ ¸¸ºº> ~~~(¸¸ER¸¸ºº> |
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Mystic One Member
since 2003-09-14
Posts 134 |
Very Nice |
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Marge Tindal
since 1999-11-06
Posts 42384Florida's Foreverly Shores |
HappyPoet~ Those feelings of anticipation are shared by many~ *Huglets* ~*Marge*~ ~*When the heart grieves over what it has lost, |
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