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Krawdad
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0 posted 2003-11-04 02:28 PM


A Missed Rung on an Old Ladder


Since you are not there
to catch me when I fall
I must imagine such exhilaration
(The adrenalin rush would overwhelm me!)

But I catch myself
just before I slip away
and climb, disappointed,
into my dream.







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1 posted 2003-11-04 03:59 PM


Krawdad~
This one has a distinctive feel to it ... and I've slipped a time or two on that ladder~

*Huglets*
~*Marge*~

~*When the heart grieves over what it has lost,
the spirit rejoices over what it has left.
- Sufi epigram
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Aenimal
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the ass-end of space
2 posted 2003-11-04 04:04 PM


I know this need someone to steady mine its a rickety old thing
Enchantress
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Canada eh.
3 posted 2003-11-04 04:19 PM


Know exactly what you mean...excellent writing.
Hugs~

~Time has cast a spell on you,
  So you won't ever forget me~

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