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Open Poetry #29

In the newspaper I read an (senryu)

ice
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0 posted 2003-11-01 10:27 AM

Obituary
Name in bold print,an old friend
Dibilitating

Marge Tindal

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Florida's Foreverly Shores

1 posted 2003-11-01 10:51 AM

Ice~
A quiet sublety to this piece~
*Huglets*
~*Marge*~

~*When the heart grieves over what it has lost,
the spirit rejoices over what it has left.
- Sufi epigram
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Martie

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2 posted 2003-11-01 11:09 AM

Ford

The name, whether you already knew of the death or not, when seen in print that way, somehow makes it more final. Impactful poem!

Mistletoe Angel

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3 posted 2003-11-01 11:49 AM

(big hugggssssssss) This is powerful, sweet friend, I know that feeling ever so well when looking at the obituaries and reading of their profiles and services! (sigh) God Bless You, sweet friend, we all love you so much! You have such a beautiful heart, sweet friend, thank you for sharing!

May love and light always shine upon you!

Love,
Noah Eaton

I don't need no proof when it comes to God and truth
I can see the sun set and I perceive

***Live***

EvocativeVerse2
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4 posted 2003-11-01 01:00 PM

Mmm well done ice...not what I was hgoping for from you this morning though. This is just to powerful for mine eyes today! Well done!

Remember, if you're not part of the future, you're history!

passing shadows
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displaced

5 posted 2003-11-02 02:08 AM

yes, it is

Sunshine

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Listening to every heart

6 posted 2003-11-02 08:19 AM

It CAN pull one up short...
thank you, Ford.

ice
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7 posted 2003-11-02 10:58 AM

Thank you all for your comments, each one is precious to me, It is a good feeling to be read and understood...
Thank you all again.....
>>>ice<<<

icebox
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in the shadows

8 posted 2003-11-03 06:13 PM

reality shines
bright and unexpectedly
capturing the heart

Earth Angel
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9 posted 2003-11-03 06:32 PM

Well, one thing is fer sure! ~ You'll never read your own name in the Obits!

Sorry for your loss and for how it affected you personally.

Loving hugs,
EA

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