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gravity fall |
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pandonov Member
since 2003-10-03
Posts 478b/w conscience and insolence 
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fragments borrowing(s) of last strangled on a memory thread peeve breaths, gasps of rusty madden close to another kind, sheer stranger. naked cry paralyzed… heavy skin, bears weight of ex-touches, limited to a crawl animated fall… nail-divided stripes filaments criticized on walls. sleep, pillowed in rummage, lust of crust sentiment fleshed in carbon paper. all scars saved… |
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Kethry Member Rara Avis
since 2000-07-29
Posts 9082Victoria Australia |
Petre, I'm not sure I understand this but it is - as I know it- art in its purest form. Bravo! Kethry Here in the midst of my lonely abyss, a single joy I find...your presence in my mind. Unknown |
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Ratleader
since 2003-01-23
Posts 7026Visiting Earth on a Guest Pass |
Your imagery is so incredibly original -- I'm looking for more, right now! Good stuff, with poetry lessons in it. ~~(¸¸¸¸ºº> ~~(¸¸¸¸ºº> ~~(¸¸ ¸¸ºº> ~~~(¸¸ER¸¸ºº> |
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Kaoru
since 2003-06-07
Posts 3892where the wild flowers grow |
I've kept mine saved.. |
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pandonov Member
since 2003-10-03
Posts 478b/w conscience and insolence |
thx to all of you |
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