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Martie
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0 posted 2003-10-26 09:49 PM




Smoke and ashes
fill the lungs of the children
celebrating another birthday
and I missed it
packing things of importance.


© Copyright 2003 Martie Odell Ingebretsen - All Rights Reserved
Magnus
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1 posted 2003-10-26 09:51 PM


Oh gosh,  Martie...  are you guys in the
way of that fire?  Sending prayers and
hugs...  I hope all remains well for you.


I am here....

Enchantress
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2 posted 2003-10-26 09:53 PM


Stay safe Martie!
Keep in touch when you can.
Heart Hugs.

Seymour Tabin
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3 posted 2003-10-26 10:10 PM


Martie
Much to think about here.

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Gaia
4 posted 2003-10-26 10:16 PM


Be safe, Martie, and please check in with us when you can.
California is my birth home state, and this is really horrible news to watch on TV.

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5 posted 2003-10-27 12:13 PM


I was worrying for you today, as we boogied south to get out of the smoke....and got into more, having conveniently forgotten that San Diego is also on fire.

Hope things don't get any worse than they are.

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6 posted 2003-10-27 04:13 AM


sending prayers and hugs
Janet Marie
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Duncan
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8 posted 2003-10-27 08:32 AM


Be safe!!  Please, don't take any chances.  And know that a lot of people are thinking of ya'll.  
Sunshine
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9 posted 2003-10-27 09:07 AM


You know we're there with you...
suthern
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10 posted 2003-10-27 09:32 AM


Our California poets have been so much in my thoughts and prayers... stay safe!!! I know those packed treasures are dampened with tears and fears... my heart aches for all of you in danger's path.


Jason Lyle
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11 posted 2003-10-27 10:04 AM


Praying for safety and luck to you and yours.

Jason

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12 posted 2003-10-27 03:46 PM


Powerful words.

I pray you and your friends and family are safe.

Love,
Eric

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13 posted 2003-10-27 04:06 PM


Martie I sure hope you're going to be OK

I wish you safety throughout....


Eric

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14 posted 2003-10-27 04:13 PM


Martie, I don't know how many more of you poets are out there, but I have really been thinking of you, Ratleader, and Bluesey and all of your loved ones. Please stay safe.
I can only imagine what you're going through.
With love and hugs,
Ethel

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15 posted 2003-10-27 05:21 PM


Stay safe, Martie!   We need you!
Larry

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16 posted 2003-10-27 05:30 PM


Oh, having been away from my puter a few days I've had no idea this is happening. Martie, Ed and Ms Blues, please stay safe and please know you're in my htoughts and prayers are on the way.

hugs
Maree.

fate is not just
whose cooking  smells good
but which way the wind blows

(Ani DiFranco)


JamesMichael
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17 posted 2003-10-27 06:51 PM


Hope everyone is safe...my youngest son and exwife live close to the fire areas...not too close I hope...James
kayjay
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18 posted 2003-10-27 07:05 PM


With many others, I offer good thoughts for your safety, but the stark message of your few words is awesome.  KJ

Through rubble and trouble and dark of night
The yawn of a dawn will hasten the light

James_A_Fraser
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19 posted 2003-10-27 10:04 PM


It's pretty bad down here, sorry to hear you've got it around LA too. I think we'll all be having some California Dreams, from the toxins in this smoke!



~~J

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20 posted 2003-10-28 11:03 AM


powerfully written to evoke all of our concerns for you - such a tragic situtation - my thoughts and energy are surely with you - Paul
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21 posted 2003-10-31 02:33 PM


Smoke and ash, yes.... but many more important things are there and I applaud you for hanging on to them. You're inspiring, to say the least.

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