Open Poetry #29 |
I Wonder |
SharaRose Member Elite
since 2003-07-19
Posts 2501Somewhere out there~ |
I wonder. Why is it you feel the need to discredit one as insignificant as I? Don't you have anything better to do with your time? What do you care? What does it matter to you whether I do, or do not rhyme? What's it to you? Is it any business of yours? For you to have a say A long time ago A very long time ago, you are the one by your choice closed that door. You wondered to me in thought, What would my friends think of me If they knew I cared for you? After all you'd said after all the revenge and hate you'd sought. Well you wanted all your friends. I didn't fit in You cared more for what they'd think than anything to you, I had ever brought. I remember a time when I thought Maybe you lurked in the corners dark places behind walls where I wouldn't know it was you just so you could see my name come to your sight. Remember that? But they all meant more to you. I wonder why, why is it they couldn't share you? Why didn't they care? Why didn't they? Why didn't they see what you want- ed? If they love, couldn't they see you want- ed me in your sight? Why didn't they aide you in your fight to have that thing you want- ed? Is that right? I wonder.. to that.. what do you have to say? |
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the_loner_23 Member Ascendant
since 2002-06-08
Posts 5479Jacksonville, Florida, USA |
A very strong piece of work. Beautifully written though. Cold hands means a warm heart |
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SharaRose Member Elite
since 2003-07-19
Posts 2501Somewhere out there~ |
Hugs to you... Terri~ |
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Patricia Member Elite
since 2003-04-06
Posts 2160Missouri |
I have wondered down this road, Terri. Finally, I decided it was his loss. You did a wonderful job of describing this "wonder." You took me back to that time in my life, which, by the way, was a time of growth for me. Take care, Patricia |
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SharaRose Member Elite
since 2003-07-19
Posts 2501Somewhere out there~ |
Thank you for your read, and comment. I appreciate your thoughts so much, but after some thinking...like you say...growth happens, and I see things differently now. BIG Hugs to you for these supportive words. You have no idea how much they meant to me. God Bless!! Love, Terri~ |
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Mistletoe Angel
since 2000-12-17
Posts 32816Portland, Oregon |
(big hugggssssssss) Oh Shara, you always write with such honesty and deep emotion, sweet friend, it truly is his loss and perhaps it is all for the better! (sigh) I send angel hugs your way, sweet friend, God Bless You, we all love you so much! You have such a beautiful heart, sweet Terri, thank you for sharing! May love and light always shine upon you! Love, Noah Eaton I don't need no proof when it comes to God and truth |
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SharaRose Member Elite
since 2003-07-19
Posts 2501Somewhere out there~ |
Love, and hugs to you Noah...Thank you for these words. God Bless, Terri~ [This message has been edited by SharaRose (11-01-2003 08:56 PM).] |
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