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Open Poetry #29

egotism

pandonov
Member

since 2003-10-03

Posts 478
b/w conscience and insolence

0 posted 2003-10-27 09:43 PM

tired of pyrotechnics in the head
i embrace coldness
as blessing.
any coldness.

inkedgoddess
Member Rara Avis

since 2002-11-19

Posts 7392
Ohio

1 posted 2003-10-27 09:57 PM

but why?

jwesley
Member Rara Avis

since 2000-04-30

Posts 7563
Spring, Texas

2 posted 2003-10-27 09:59 PM

really like the almost "after thought" of the last line...tired it all together really well.

jwesley

wandering glider
Senior Member

since 2001-04-04

Posts 501
aloft

3 posted 2003-10-27 10:07 PM

coldness
like silence
reshapes

Aenimal
Member Rara Avis

since 2002-11-18

Posts 7350
the ass-end of space

4 posted 2003-10-27 10:21 PM

the shiver
of a winter's wind
is feeling enough
for the numbed

pandonov
Member

since 2003-10-03

Posts 478
b/w conscience and insolence

5 posted 2003-10-27 10:31 PM

hm, winter, not down here in Florida

Ratleader

Member Rara Avis

since 2003-01-23

Posts 7026
Visiting Earth on a Guest Pass

6 posted 2003-10-31 01:33 PM

Yes, there's refuge in that, though any refuge is also a trap.

Think I have a new addition to my favorite poets of PIP. You have a way with imagery that truly shines.

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Kaoru

Member Elite

since 2003-06-07

Posts 3892
where the wild flowers grow

7 posted 2003-10-31 01:48 PM

Seems you inspire,

BluesSerenade
Member Patricius

since 2001-10-23

Posts 10549
By the Seaside

8 posted 2003-11-01 07:37 PM

I would rather freeze than get burned all over again.

Reason being, nobody ever admits to lighting the match!

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