Open Poetry #29 |
The loneliness |
Deb Lynne Member
since 1999-08-19
Posts 180Where blue skies meet blue ocean |
The loneliness doesn't hit me As long as my mind is occupied But creeps up in bed next to me To lie so quietly by my side Out of a deep sleep it awakes me Like a cold air across my skin And I'm back to counting hours Until the sun begins to rise again |
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Mistletoe Angel
since 2000-12-17
Posts 32816Portland, Oregon |
(smiles) Oh Deb, this is beautiful, sweet friend, we're all sooooooo happy you're back! (big hugggsssssss) God Bless You, sweet friend, here's wishing for all that loneliness to subside from here on in, we all love you so much! You have such a beautiful heart, sweet Deb, thank you for sharing! May love and light always shine upon you! Love, Noah Eaton I don't need no proof when it comes to God and truth |
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jwesley Member Rara Avis
since 2000-04-30
Posts 7563Spring, Texas |
You did this perfectly, my friend...loved it! jwesley [This message has been edited by jwesley (11-01-2003 02:59 PM).] |
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GG Member Elite
since 2002-12-03
Posts 3532Lost in thought |
yes.... I know this... you wrote of it well. Like this alot, Always, Alyssa - And so it was that time stood still - |
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Suetang Member Ascendant
since 2001-03-07
Posts 5187Melbourne, Australia |
Hello Deb This was so very well written, I could feel it. Take care......Sue I am in motion |
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Balladeer
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Member Empyrean
since 1999-06-05
Posts 25505Ft. Lauderdale, Fl USA |
Been there....done that, Deb. We can block it out with effort but it's always there, ready to sneak in as soon as our defenses are down. You say it very well |
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