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meteoraLP
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since 2003-10-24
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0 posted 2003-10-30 01:20 PM

The light burns into her skull,
A mundane figment of life
To other beings.
She walks,
Eyes sunken deep within her core,
To the place she fears.
She can't turn around-
The light is far too beautiful.

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1 posted 2003-10-30 03:43 PM


Very ghostly...it must be a very
wicked feeling, being that lost...

well done.
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