Open Poetry #29 |
Without Fear |
Magnus
since 2001-10-10
Posts 14135South Carolina, USA |
Like a warm bath, a hug....enwrapping ever softly as drops of tenderness ripple the waters. Soothing the senses suffering of to many toils or troubles. If I were.... I would give you the warm waters that hold you ever lightly, that you might dream, feeling secure within as bubbles tickle to a smile.. If I could... I would wish upon that star to shine brilliantly into your window.... bringing a ray of hope on a breeze. I will... Forever lingering, an oak of whispering leaves that fall to your feet...that your softened walk might be trod with courage...as you walk the valley in comfort...without fear. [This message has been edited by Magnus (10-26-2003 08:57 PM).] |
||
© Copyright 2003 Barry J. Tackett - All Rights Reserved | |||
Midnitesun
since 2001-05-18
Posts 28647Gaia |
can I keep this to hug on a scary cold night? |
||
SharaRose Member Elite
since 2003-07-19
Posts 2501Somewhere out there~ |
Awww...this is another sweet one I've read tonight..hehe what is it...you guys drinking something in the water tonight...just kidding...giggling about that. No really this is so sweet, and tender and gentle and loving. What a loving kind thing to do for your sweetie. Nice to read! Love, Terri~ |
||
littlewing Member Rara Avis
since 2003-03-02
Posts 9655New York |
me too? Barry, goodness what a calming beautiful picture I can hang on my wall *smile* xxoo |
||
Enchantress Member Empyrean
since 2001-08-14
Posts 35113Canada eh. |
"I will... Forever lingering, an oak of whispering leaves that fall to your feet...that your softened walk might be trod with courage...as you walk the valley in comfort...without fear." Barry..Barry....Barry.... ~Time has cast a spell on you, |
||
Pilgrimage Member Elite
since 2001-12-04
Posts 3945Texas, USA |
How sweet. How comforting. Sigh. Nan (Pilgrim variety) |
||
passing shadows Member Empyrean
since 1999-08-26
Posts 45577displaced |
ah...to have such a friend as you...a gift priceless |
||
dingusjr Member
since 2003-09-24
Posts 415Missouri |
One your your best....enjoyed it greatly. Larry |
||
suthern
since 1999-07-29
Posts 20723Louisiana |
Ah.... without fear. *S* I've just reached the "without self-condemnation" stage... but you've given me a goal. *S* And a marvelous poem.... this is beautiful! |
||
Susan Caldwell Member Rara Avis
since 2002-12-27
Posts 8348Florida |
"If I could... I would wish upon that star to shine brilliantly into your window.... bringing a ray of hope on a breeze." ...a ray of hope on a breeze... I love that line...you are amazing. "if you won't let me fall for you |
||
Seymour Tabin Member Empyrean
since 1999-07-07
Posts 31720Tamarac Fla |
Barry "in comfort...without fear. And without a tear. Well done. |
||
Ericc Member Elite
since 2003-01-31
Posts 4178 |
Always so lyrical and full of beauty. Thanks. Eric |
||
Sunshine
Administrator
Member Empyrean
since 1999-06-25
Posts 63354Listening to every heart |
trod with courage...as you walk the valley in comfort...without fear. ~*~ Oh, very good. Very good! |
||
SEA
Moderator
Member Seraphic
since 2000-01-18
Posts 22676with you |
oh this is wonderful! I loved the feelings here |
||
Earth Angel Member Empyrean
since 2002-08-27
Posts 40215Realms of Light |
I, the loquacious one, am speechless! HHH Linda |
||
garysgirl
since 2002-09-29
Posts 19237Florida, USA |
I will... Forever lingering, an oak of whispering leaves that fall to your feet...that your softened walk might be trod with courage...as you walk the valley in comfort...without fear. This is so beautiful, Barry...and so sweet. Hugs Ethel |
||
vandana
since 1999-10-22
Posts 10463USA |
enjoyed |
||
ThisDiamond Member Rara Avis
since 2002-02-22
Posts 9353Michigan, USA |
There is no stronger healing than the warm wishes of a good friend. Thanks for this one Mag. TD |
||
s1nfully_1nn0c3nt Senior Member
since 2003-10-26
Posts 1105Watertown, NY |
I Loved It~!~ I'd Rather Be Hated For Who I Am Then Loved For What I'm Not~!~ |
||
Gentle Spirit Member Patricius
since 2000-10-09
Posts 13989 |
I think I will keep this one Barry, to come back to and read over and over again. Very well done sir. |
||
Nightshade
since 2001-08-31
Posts 13962just out of reach |
If I could... I would wish upon that star to shine brilliantly into your window.... bringing a ray of hope on a breeze My dear friend Magnus.....I wish you could. Wonderful write as always. Chris |
||
Brad Majors
since 2001-04-03
Posts 2647Georgia |
well done |
||
⇧ top of page ⇧ | ||
All times are ET (US). All dates are in Year-Month-Day format. |