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Magnus
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0 posted 2003-10-26 07:45 PM


Like a warm bath, a hug....enwrapping
ever softly as drops of tenderness  ripple
the waters.   Soothing the senses suffering
of to many toils or troubles.

If I were....  I would give you the warm
waters that hold you ever lightly, that
you might dream, feeling secure within
as bubbles tickle to a smile..

If I could...  I would wish upon that
star to shine brilliantly into your window....
bringing a ray of hope on a breeze.

I will...  Forever lingering, an oak
of whispering leaves that fall to your
feet...that your softened walk might be
trod with courage...as you walk the valley
in comfort...without fear.

[This message has been edited by Magnus (10-26-2003 08:57 PM).]

© Copyright 2003 Barry J. Tackett - All Rights Reserved
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1 posted 2003-10-26 08:33 PM


can I keep this to hug on a scary cold night?

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2 posted 2003-10-26 08:35 PM


Awww...this is another sweet one I've read tonight..hehe what is it...you guys drinking something in the water tonight...just kidding...giggling about that. No really this is so sweet, and tender and gentle and loving. What a loving kind thing to do for your sweetie. Nice to read!

Love,
Terri~

littlewing
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3 posted 2003-10-26 08:36 PM


me too?

Barry, goodness what a calming beautiful
picture I can hang on my wall
*smile*
xxoo

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4 posted 2003-10-26 08:39 PM


"I will...  Forever lingering, an oak
of whispering leaves that fall to your
feet...that your softened walk might be
trod with courage...as you walk the valley
in comfort...without fear."

Barry..Barry....Barry....
*SIGH*

~Time has cast a spell on you,
  So you won't ever forget me~

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5 posted 2003-10-26 10:26 PM


How sweet. How comforting. Sigh.

Nan (Pilgrim variety)

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6 posted 2003-10-27 04:15 AM


ah...to have such a friend as you...a gift priceless
dingusjr
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7 posted 2003-10-27 04:18 AM


One your your best....enjoyed it greatly.
Larry

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8 posted 2003-10-27 09:20 AM


Ah.... without fear. *S* I've just reached the "without self-condemnation" stage... but you've given me a goal. *S*

And a marvelous poem.... this is beautiful!

Susan Caldwell
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9 posted 2003-10-27 12:05 PM


"If I could...  I would wish upon that
star to shine brilliantly into your window....
bringing a ray of hope on a breeze."

...a ray of hope on a breeze...

I love that line...you are amazing.


"if you won't let me fall for you
then you won't see the best that I would love to do for you"
~Dido~

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10 posted 2003-10-27 12:10 PM


Barry
"in comfort...without fear.
And without a tear. Well done.

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11 posted 2003-10-27 03:43 PM


Always so lyrical and full of beauty.
Thanks.

Eric

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12 posted 2003-10-27 04:31 PM


trod with courage...as you walk the valley
in comfort...without fear.

~*~

Oh, very good.  Very good!

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13 posted 2003-10-28 10:14 AM


oh this is wonderful! I loved the feelings here
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14 posted 2003-10-28 10:17 AM


I, the loquacious one, am speechless!

HHH
Linda

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15 posted 2003-10-28 11:55 AM


I will...  Forever lingering, an oak
of whispering leaves that fall to your
feet...that your softened walk might be
trod with courage...as you walk the valley
in comfort...without fear.



This is so beautiful, Barry...and so sweet.  
Hugs  
Ethel

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16 posted 2003-10-29 05:36 PM


enjoyed
ThisDiamond
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17 posted 2003-10-29 11:21 PM


There is no stronger healing than the warm wishes of a good friend.
Thanks for this one Mag. TD

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18 posted 2003-10-30 04:52 AM


I Loved It~!~

I'd Rather Be Hated For Who I Am Then Loved For What I'm Not~!~

Much Luv,
~!~"Trina"~!~

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19 posted 2003-10-30 05:42 AM


I think I will keep this one Barry, to come back to and read over and over again.  Very  well done sir.
Nightshade
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20 posted 2003-10-30 02:14 PM


If I could...  I would wish upon that
star to shine brilliantly into your window....
bringing a ray of hope on a breeze

My dear friend Magnus.....I wish you could. Wonderful write as always. Chris

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21 posted 2003-10-30 03:28 PM


well done
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