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Open Poetry #29

Silence

James_A_Fraser
Senior Member

since 2003-09-03

Posts 972
Out Making Anticlines

0 posted 2003-10-29 07:22 PM

Wishing
For you to talk
Hurts more than I can say,
Your silence worse than any shout;
It hurts.

mytuesdaywishes
Member

since 2003-09-05

Posts 254
a voice from the musicbox

1 posted 2003-10-29 07:38 PM

there's a song by bush that sums this up i think....silence is not the way....or even, nothing hurts like your mouth...sorry, i thought of music when i read this, wonderful write

i think that it's brainless to assume that making changes to your window's view will gain a new perspective.

Sunshine

Administrator

Member Empyrean

since 1999-06-25

Posts 63354
Listening to every heart

2 posted 2003-10-29 07:57 PM

Yes...Sounds of Silence
will now be with me all night...

suthern

Member Seraphic

since 1999-07-29

Posts 20723
Louisiana

3 posted 2003-10-30 07:11 AM

Silence can speak with such heartbreaking eloquence... just like this poem. *S* Sad but superb write... hope all is well.

Martie

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since 1999-09-21

Posts 28049
California

4 posted 2003-10-30 09:53 AM

Jamie....*hug*

Pilgrimage
Member Elite

since 2001-12-04

Posts 3945
Texas, USA

5 posted 2003-10-30 03:48 PM

James, I love the way you use the form to emphasize the hurt. Nicely done.

Nan (Pilgrim variety)

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