Open Poetry #29 |
Aced |
James_A_Fraser Senior Member
since 2003-09-03
Posts 972Out Making Anticlines |
Aced all our chips on the table hands set no more cards to draw she quietly turns over an ace smiles her win and walks away |
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suthern
since 1999-07-29
Posts 20723Louisiana |
Ouch. This sounds like a high stakes loss. I hope the next round is kinder to you.... I hate to think of you defeated, even momentarily. *S* Excellent write! |
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Sunshine
Administrator
Member Empyrean
since 1999-06-25
Posts 63354Listening to every heart |
Ah, but what was the bet? That's what I want to know! |
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Martie
Moderator
Member Empyrean
since 1999-09-21
Posts 28049California |
Hi Jamie Seems like sometimes the important thing is just to win? |
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Pilgrimage Member Elite
since 2001-12-04
Posts 3945Texas, USA |
This one is powerfully simple. Well done. Nan (Pilgrim variety) |
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SharaRose Member Elite
since 2003-07-19
Posts 2501Somewhere out there~ |
She only won if it mattered to you. If it didn't matter would you have given it a thought? Terri~ |
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passing shadows Member Empyrean
since 1999-08-26
Posts 45577displaced |
damn, isn't that the way it happens sometimes |
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Krawdad Member Elite
since 2001-01-03
Posts 2597 |
Chalk it up to just a little more male rejection? |
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BluesSerenade Member Patricius
since 2001-10-23
Posts 10549By the Seaside |
Well heck, ya win some, ya lose some, but it sure feels good when you can walk away without losing it all. You ever play craps James_A?... she's coming out about now! Nice going Ace~ |
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jwesley Member Rara Avis
since 2000-04-30
Posts 7563Spring, Texas |
Smart woman! Enjoyed. jwesley |
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garysgirl
since 2002-09-29
Posts 19237Florida, USA |
James, I almost called you someone that you remind me of. In fact, I already had it typed. LOL You did say a lot between the lines in this one, Sir. Very thought-provoking to the reader. That's a good thing, you know. Hugs Ethel |
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GG Member Elite
since 2002-12-03
Posts 3532Lost in thought |
its the girl thing.... we're good Love it Always, Alyssa - And so it was that time stood still - |
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