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0 posted 2003-10-28 10:56 PM


Slipping into dawn’s thin sheets, and crept into your room
Still before the currents come, esteems full blown consume
Your breathing simply magical, the rise and fall of roam
That captivates my soul in echoes calling me come home

While guarding spaces undisturbed we speak a vivid tongue
Defining raptures musculature in rippling mine among
And whispers traded in the winds of heart sounds never spared
Before me, in this sacred place, where fantasies are shared

In nature’s evolution glows magnificent as such
Inspired sounds that emanate beneath each velvet touch
My eyes fill up in crystal seas that bathe you in this fire
From far below these feelings glow to imminent desire

As we become the rising sun, to feast a banquet shared as one
Inside explodes of bright implodes to pools completely done
All this exists within one thought that cannot cease to be
And I succumb the total sum of love that lives in me

Copyright Kkh 10/28/03


© Copyright 2003 Kathleen Harris - All Rights Reserved
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1 posted 2003-10-28 11:01 PM


"In nature’s evolution glows magnificent as such
Inspired sounds that emanate beneath each velvet touch
My eyes fill up in crystal seas that bathe you in this fire
From far below these feelings glow to imminent desire

As we become the rising sun, to feast a banquet shared as one
Inside explodes of bright implodes to pools completely done
All this exists within one thought that cannot cease to be
And I succumb the total sum of love that lives in me"


LOVE THIS

the_loner_23
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2 posted 2003-10-28 11:08 PM


This is beautiful

Cold hands means a warm heart

BluesSerenade
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3 posted 2003-10-30 07:11 PM


Still before the currents come, esteems full blown consume
Your breathing simply magical, the rise and fall of roam

Beautiful poem Kathleen, especially loved those couple lines.

This is the perfect fall, and always so lovely from you!

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4 posted 2003-10-30 10:07 PM


As we become the rising sun, to feast a banquet shared as one
Inside explodes of bright implodes to pools completely done
All this exists within one thought that cannot cease to be
And I succumb the total sum of love that lives in me''''

Very lovely Lady... hugssss


Lauren~

Will the wind ever remember the names
it has blown in the past with
its crutch its old age and its widsom
it whispers no this won't be the last

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