Open Poetry #29 |
Close Your Eyes |
froggy Senior Member
since 2003-06-23
Posts 1893Michigan |
Close your eyes, listen to the sounds of the night. Feel my hand, the warmth as my fingers gently entwine with your own. Close your eyes for you're not alone as I am with you always. |
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Pilgrimage Member Elite
since 2001-12-04
Posts 3945Texas, USA |
What a comforting poem. I like it. A lot. Nan (Pilgrim variety) |
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Krawdad Member Elite
since 2001-01-03
Posts 2597 |
sigh |
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PsychoticBunni Member
since 2003-10-03
Posts 162Mythical Atlantis |
sweetness in abundance. Meg Meg- And the Texan pushed the Mexican out of the plane and screamed, "Long live the ALAMO!!!!!!!!!" |
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Earth Angel Member Empyrean
since 2002-08-27
Posts 40215Realms of Light |
Your words are so comforting. You, dear Froggy, may be cold-blooded, but your heart is full of warmth and love. HHH Linda |
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ice Member Elite
since 2003-05-17
Posts 3404Pennsylvania |
Very nice, froggy, especially the middle stanza..... :-) ice/ford |
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whispering wind Junior Member
since 2003-08-18
Posts 45 |
Oh this is beautiful. It is always nice to know there is someone there with you holding your hand. |
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s1nfully_1nn0c3nt Senior Member
since 2003-10-26
Posts 1105Watertown, NY |
Yes The Feeling Of Anothers Hand Is A Great Feeling And You Explained It Wonderfully~!~ I'd Rather Be Hated For Who I Am Then Loved For What I'm Not~!~ |
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passing shadows Member Empyrean
since 1999-08-26
Posts 45577displaced |
beautiful thoughts |
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froggy Senior Member
since 2003-06-23
Posts 1893Michigan |
Thank-you all for the wonderful comments. This poem is an oldie of mine from a couple years ago. It is always a comforting feeling when one is alone to face whatever, to know that there is always a waiting hand to hold. Thank-you again for all the comments. Hugs to each of you. :-) |
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