Open Poetry #29 |
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Thoughts |
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KristieSue![]() ![]() ![]() ![]()
since 2003-01-31
Posts 1460PA, US ![]() |
I think I love you I thought while waking to find you gazing lovingly watching my chest rise and fall I know I need you I decided later on while we walked hand in hand along a path of trees I really want you I cried as we parted each going our separate ways to finish our day's end Now I sit here thinking knowing I haven't reached love yet but I do need you, want you and see a love in our future So til then please hold me tight be patient with me and our love and when that day comes slow but sure it will be our full heart's desire Ya know what they say. Curiosity salted the snail. |
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mytuesdaywishes Member
since 2003-09-05
Posts 254a voice from the musicbox |
pretty...and idealistic, but pretty... i think that it's brainless to assume that making changes to your window's view will gain a new perspective. |
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EvocativeVerse2 Senior Member
since 2003-09-10
Posts 1279 |
Hey KristieSue. This is the first thing I've seen from you in some time. Nice job. Love is always worth the effort of a little time. You go girl! Remember, if you're not part of the future, you're history! |
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littlewing Member Rara Avis
since 2003-03-02
Posts 9655New York |
You know Kristie . . . this is the most insightful write I have seen from you *smile* it comes when your not looking so dont pay attention xxoo |
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KristieSue![]() ![]() ![]() ![]()
since 2003-01-31
Posts 1460PA, US |
Tuesday Thank you...a bit too idealistic for my brain :-) EV Thanks...hopefully I'll be able to spit some out in the next week or so... Sue Thanks, I appreciate it. Scary as hell, but it came. Ya know what they say. Curiosity salted the snail. |
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