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James_A_Fraser
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Out Making Anticlines
0 posted 2003-10-29 07:15 PM

At seven, Whizzo:
One clown who didn't scare me.
And now there are two.

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1 posted 2003-10-29 07:17 PM


Sounds of extreme politics...
or you had dinner at a really funny place!
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2 posted 2003-10-30 07:01 AM

I like this very much... the contradiction between the title and the acceptance in the poem make me believe this second clown lacks the inate goodness of Whizzo. *S*

Subtle and excellent! *S*
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