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Quiet Hero
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Quiet Hero |
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Lotus Breeze Member
since 2003-09-06
Posts 112
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No reason to smile Till I saw your eyes watching, Where you there long while? I would not keep you waiting If I knew you there Brings dinner to me working Hand made and with care; Saying so few words to me And leaving much too quickly |
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Sunshine
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Member Empyrean
since 1999-06-25
Posts 63354Listening to every heart |
The quiet comfort of a knowing friend. Enjoyed this, Lotus. |
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Professor Gloom Member Elite
since 2000-07-23
Posts 3082of Depression |
Often times The hero is just the one in the right place At the right time Good poem Gloom |
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passing shadows Member Empyrean
since 1999-08-26
Posts 45577displaced |
wonderful  |
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the_loner_23 Member Ascendant
since 2002-06-08
Posts 5479Jacksonville, Florida, USA |
Beautiful. Cold hands means a warm heart |
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Midnitesun
since 2001-05-18
Posts 28647Gaia |
thank you for sharing this very gentle piece |
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ThunderMage Senior Member
since 2002-06-20
Posts 812Canada |
Heroes come in all shapes and sizes, and this one sounds a lot like me. Sounds like what I always wished I could be but never had the strength to become. LOLWhat is life without poetry and adventure? |
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Lotus Breeze Member
since 2003-09-06
Posts 112 |
Teacher is kind in praise, sweet in response, hero in timing too Happiness in writing words that enjoy, passing shadows, loner23, midnitesun, give praise making writing a pleasure to do. Thundermage is hero because you are kind and does have strength. |
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JamesMichael Member Empyrean
since 1999-11-16
Posts 33336Kapolei, Hawaii, USA |
Lovely...James |
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