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1slick_lady
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standing on a shadow's lace

0 posted 2003-10-29 05:00 PM



Snuggling

I sleep
in your skin
and silent night
is broken by
your breath
where nothing here
is held back
in surrender
each time
touch is new
I watch you
in awe and splendor
as you sleep
and lie within
your rising velvet
finding myself
lost in
this close comfort

"Tough times never last...tough people do." carol gardner

© Copyright 2003 Helen Chambers - All Rights Reserved
Krawdad
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1 posted 2003-10-29 05:06 PM


mmmmmmmm
Nice place to be "lost"
And hereabouts it would be a good day to snuggle

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Aenimal
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the ass-end of space
2 posted 2003-10-29 11:45 PM


beautiful red..
passing shadows
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displaced
3 posted 2003-10-30 05:05 AM


yeah..sigh
s1nfully_1nn0c3nt
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4 posted 2003-10-30 05:10 AM


Beautiful Just Beautiful~!~

I'd Rather Be Hated For Who I Am Then Loved For What I'm Not~!~

Much Luv,
~!~"Trina"~!~

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5 posted 2003-10-31 02:01 PM


It's a good place to be lost. Nice place to visit, or to live.

~~(¸¸¸¸ºº>   ~~(¸¸¸¸ºº>  ~~(¸¸ ¸¸ºº>    ~~~(¸¸ER¸¸ºº>
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garysgirl
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6 posted 2003-10-31 02:05 PM


where nothing here
is held back
in surrender
each time
touch is new



UH-HUHHHHHH  Helen!!

suthern
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7 posted 2003-11-01 07:15 AM


Yes... *soft sigh*... how I'd like to be living this poem right now. *S*

Excellent write! *S*

Ericc
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8 posted 2003-11-01 10:06 AM


Wow Helen...!!!!!

Eric

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9 posted 2003-11-01 10:53 AM


OneSlick~
Just a beautiful penning~
*sigh*
*Huglets*
~*Marge*~

~*When the heart grieves over what it has lost,
the spirit rejoices over what it has left.
- Sufi epigram
     noles1@totcon.com     

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10 posted 2003-11-01 11:29 AM




(smiles) Oh Helen, this is beautiful, sweet friend, and may true comfort and love forever keep you warm and dreaming comfortably! (kiss on cheek) God Bless You, sweet friend, we all love you so much! You have such a beautiful heart, sweet Helen, thank you for sharing!



May love and light always shine upon you!

Love,
Noah Eaton

I don't need no proof when it comes to God and truth
I can see the sun set and I perceive

***Live***

littlewing
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since 2003-03-02
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11 posted 2003-11-02 11:38 AM


God yes Helen . . .
a must indeed
I love this
adore it
I am getting sleepy . . .
xxoo

pandonov
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b/w conscience and insolence
12 posted 2003-11-02 12:23 PM


nice stuff here
Temptress
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13 posted 2003-11-02 07:38 PM


beautiful work as always. You always seem to be writing my thoughts, Lady.


I LOVE YOU! I LOVE YOU! I LOVE YOU!


alisa
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14 posted 2003-11-03 05:29 PM


this is amazing.....great one.
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