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1slick_lady
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standing on a shadow's lace

0 posted 2003-10-29 11:16 AM



Clearly

ribbons
of night
bind us
thinly lined
strips of silk
a pattern
of looping
inner circle
time in wind
curling to
a cellophane
place

"Tough times never last...tough people do." carol gardner

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icebox
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in the shadows
1 posted 2003-10-29 11:18 AM


It sure is easy to get all wrapped up in you and your poetry.

*grin*

I love it!!!!!!!!!!!!!

littlewing
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2 posted 2003-10-29 11:20 AM


elaborate on that cellophane place
sounds amazingly peaceful Helen
God I pictured swirling mass of color
nbo sight sound time
just THIS
*smile*
xxoo

ok I just reread and OMG I cant believe what i just got out of this . . .
you are amazing truly

[This message has been edited by littlewing (10-29-2003 11:21 AM).]

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3 posted 2003-10-31 01:18 PM


Yum, reminds me of that scene from "Shakespeare In Love".....

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4 posted 2003-10-31 01:31 PM


"curling to
a cellophane
place
" ???

hmmmmmmmmm

Just had a brain hiccup.
Know what this reminds me of?
"Barbarella"
Haahaahaa

(I wouldn't make fun if I didn't know I could get away with it!)
Kiss and make up?

e


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5 posted 2003-10-31 01:49 PM


Woah..
BluesSerenade
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6 posted 2003-11-01 07:43 PM


Clearly, and so fragile is that cellophane place.

You have such a unique and beautiful style.

Peace Helen~

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7 posted 2003-11-01 08:52 PM


Another beauty Helen. hugs, Chris

Let your life lightly dance on the edges of Time like dew on the tip of a leaf. -Tagore



    

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8 posted 2003-11-02 04:38 PM




(smiles) I love the vibrancy of your words, sweet friend, you always wrap ribbons across the miles, yay, we all love you so much! You have such a beautiful heart, sweet Helen, thank you for sharing!



May love and light always shine upon you!

Love,
Noah Eaton

I don't need no proof when it comes to God and truth
I can see the sun set and I perceive

***Live***

passing shadows
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9 posted 2003-11-03 04:37 AM


smiles softly
alisa
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10 posted 2003-11-03 05:28 PM


great....
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