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This Wasn't Supposed To Happen
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This Wasn't Supposed To Happen |
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suthern
since 1999-07-29
Posts 20723Louisiana 
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You flicked me into oblivion An unwelcome piece of lint on your life Pretty beribboned gift of rejection I'm put in my place - entombed in alone Forget the cake, it's tequila straight... Found the worm, but where's numb? All the old movies have happy endings What's the secret? Happy's lost my address I sleep on the couch - less empty space And crick in neck is one pain I can bear. [This message has been edited by suthern (11-02-2003 09:41 AM).] |
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Seymour Tabin Member Empyrean
since 1999-07-07
Posts 31720Tamarac Fla |
suthern Well aren't we in a snit this morning. We think you need some  and  Now do you feel better. |
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suthern
since 1999-07-29
Posts 20723Louisiana |
Seymour: Let's put it this way... I'm skipping my birthday from now on... these "celebrations" will kill a gal. *S* Hugs are always appreciated, my friend... smooches to you! |
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nakdthoughts Member Laureate
since 2000-10-29
Posts 19200Between the Lines |
Happy Belated Birthday..sometimes I find the couch or sofa soothing..at least I have the back of it against me to make me feel "held" M |
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Sunshine
Administrator
Member Empyrean
since 1999-06-25
Posts 63354Listening to every heart |
Gads, girl...dig in and spur... I'm not doing a repeat of yesterday... this one stays. |
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suthern
since 1999-07-29
Posts 20723Louisiana |
nakdthoughts: Thank you, kind lady... and yes... that's a consideration, too. *S* [This message has been edited by suthern (11-02-2003 09:21 AM).] |
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suthern
since 1999-07-29
Posts 20723Louisiana |
Aw, Sunshiney One... you know you love me and would mop up after my wailing if I begged sweetly enough? *G* After all... I'm at mid life... when else am I gonna have my mid life crisis? *G* Gak... this IS bad, isn't it? LOL |
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Janet Marie Member Laureate
since 2000-01-22
Posts 18554 |
Hmmmm....me thinks we need to call out the moth-girlies lynch mob.... I got the tar and feathers ... who's got the torches and rope?  We will teach the bum the REAL meaning behind "hell hath no fury" (check your email..the moth is in a snit too) LOL Hallmark is gonna know my mothfury. Words break into splinters on the pages I write |
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Sunshine
Administrator
Member Empyrean
since 1999-06-25
Posts 63354Listening to every heart |
suthern, put it back! C'mon...it was GOOD! |
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littlewing Member Rara Avis
since 2003-03-02
Posts 9655New York |
Mann suthern I know that crick in the neck and it need a boot in the . . . *smile* where is Helen . . we need Helen . . . she has nice shiny big black boots  and beautiful writingxxoo |
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suthern
since 1999-07-29
Posts 20723Louisiana |
JM: Mothfury??? LOL... OH, this I've GOT to see. LOL I'll toddle off to email in just a bit. *S* Sunshine: No... it wasn't. *G* Furthermore... this IS it... or what's left... I've just been poofing a bit at a time. *G* Ya sure you won't just poof ME... or at least buy the next bottle of tequila? LOL C'mon... be a pal! *G* littlewing: I'm only 7 hours away from her... perhaps I should go get her? *G* Thank you so much... and I'm so glad happy has YOUR address. *S* |
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garysgirl 
since 2002-09-29
Posts 19237Florida, USA |
We love you, sweet suthern lady.  (Well, I tried to put you a song in this one. It didn't work like it did in my original post of my poem last night. Maybe it will in Announcements??) [This message has been edited by garysgirl (11-02-2003 01:01 PM).] |
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Enchantress Member Empyrean
since 2001-08-14
Posts 35113Canada eh. |
Damn this is good Suthern.... You sure tell it like it is!! Hugs~ ~Time has cast a spell on you, |
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Martie
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Member Empyrean
since 1999-09-21
Posts 28049California |
Ouch...and hug! |
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suthern
since 1999-07-29
Posts 20723Louisiana |
garysgirl: You sweetie. *S* Thank you! *S* I have no sound here at home (or rather... no speakers... my apartment is VERY noisy today *G*) but I'll listen as soon as I can! Enchantress: Well... there's always at least a tad of imagination incorporated. *S* I'd NEVER buy tequila with the worm! *S* Martie: Yup... and thank you! *S* |
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Mistletoe Angel
since 2000-12-17
Posts 32816Portland, Oregon |
 (big hugggsssssssss) I wish every story can have a happy ending like early Hollywood movies, as you are so deserving of true happiness! (sigh) The story continues and there will come a denouement for you, God Bless You, we all love you so much! You have such a beautiful heart, sweet Suthern, thank you for sharing! May love and light always shine upon you! Love, Noah Eaton I don't need no proof when it comes to God and truth |
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Sunnyone Member Ascendant
since 2000-07-06
Posts 5334Staffordshire, England |
Oh I do know how this one feels, believe me, and if you're like me, I always appreciate having a place to vent!!! Hugs to ya.....~S~ Accept these small gifts from my gypsy heart ~S~ |
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vandana
since 1999-10-22
Posts 10463USA |
enjoyed  |
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Pilgrimage Member Elite
since 2001-12-04
Posts 3945Texas, USA |
I love this. The pain and the rejection are well told, and the bit about Happy losing your address is phenomenal. Now I'm waiting for the one where you get sweet revenge, and the best revenge is a happy life. Nan (Pilgrim variety) |
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Magnus
since 2001-10-10
Posts 14135South Carolina, USA |
You skipping them too? I stopped years ago. Now I just accept birthday cakes sans the little glowing things that don't seem to go out for some reason.... Great write, and btw... happy whatever year birthday....29?? |
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angelblueyes Member Elite
since 2003-07-19
Posts 2148Oklahoma |
Ouch!!! You know it's time for your happiness and time for the sadness to go.Get off that couch, the girls will all be there,and we'll go out and party. Crystal |
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passing shadows Member Empyrean
since 1999-08-26
Posts 45577displaced |
oh my... sending hugs |
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Ratleader
since 2003-01-23
Posts 7026Visiting Earth on a Guest Pass |
Ow! What JM said! There oughta' be a law.... why is it that some of the best poetry around here also has the most pain in it? Wait, don't tell me -- I don't want to know! ~~(¸¸¸¸ºº> ~~(¸¸¸¸ºº> ~~(¸¸ ¸¸ºº> ~~~(¸¸ER¸¸ºº> |
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suthern
since 1999-07-29
Posts 20723Louisiana |
M'toe: I couldn't even stand to watch the happy endings. *G* Thank you! *S* Sunnyone: I actually wish my pen would dry up and/or I'd forget the URL. LOL Thank you for the hug! *S* vandana: Thank you! Pilgrimage: I'm really not a vengeful sort... more of a run and hide sort. *S* Thank you so much! Magnus: Yup... I'm banning the word next year! *G* Thank you very much! *S* angelblueyes: My cats aren't pleased with the couch arrangement... they think they deserve more room. *S* Thank you! *S* PS: Accepted gratefully. *S* Ratleader: But tar's stinky and feathers make me sneeze? LOL And please tell me you aren't accusing this drek of being good poetry? LOL Thank you, my friend. *S* |
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