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Aroas New Member
since 2003-10-28
Posts 8 |
here is a other poem... i wrote a other one if you want to read and feel that one then go to the top "Made with Love" You everytime when you smiled i looked at you everytime when you cried i looked at you While i'm sitting behind my desk writing a poem how i think of you how i feel for you while tears in my eyes i can't stop it i feel that much for you i can't stop thinking you're in my mind you're in my dreams it feels like i'm broken... i hear music sad music it makes me soft it makes me vulnerable While i put my feelings in a poem i release all of my anger and let happinnes inside forget al the bad moments looking around me and saying to myself WAKE UP!!! ...while i wake up i feel a smile on my head and saying happy thank God... it was just a dream about you... |
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the_loner_23 Member Ascendant
since 2002-06-08
Posts 5479Jacksonville, Florida, USA |
Enjoyed the read. Cold hands means a warm heart |
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Martie
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since 1999-09-21
Posts 28049California |
Nice! and sound like love.  |
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