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Aroas New Member
since 2003-10-28
Posts 8 |
Hello everyone... let me introduce myself. I am Karim Khan (Aroas) and i have been searching for various poetry sites and i found a couple of good ones and this is one of them. Before you continue reading this message, please read them carefully and go in to his/er perspectief and feel what they feel at that moment, if you do that then you can feel like me thats for now.... Rain While i am standing here all alone waiting for some one waiting for a girl Its raining no sunshine anymore just pain pain that stays with out knowing she is waiting for me waiting in the rain outside cold the wind blows so cold don't leave me alone please... don't leave me all alone... in the rain |
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Ringo 
since 2003-02-20
Posts 3684Saluting with misty eyes |
don't leave me all alone... in the rain ******************************** How many times I have asked this same thing. Welcome to Passions!!!!!!!!! I definately feel your writing will be a very welcome addition to our site. We are all equal but we’re individually different |
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Aroas New Member
since 2003-10-28
Posts 8 |
Thanks, I'm very happy that you have accepted me  and glad that you also feel the same, i will be writing more and more, all made with love, if you want i have ICQ and msn, you can contact me anythime anywhere ICQ: 243773210 MSN: [email protected] greets, Karim |
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garysgirl
since 2002-09-29
Posts 19237Florida, USA |
Aroas, this is a very good poem, with lots of emotion felt. Welcome to Passions in Poetry. I look forward to reading more of your work. I hope you enjoy it here.  Hugs  Ethel |
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littlewing Member Rara Avis
since 2003-03-02
Posts 9655New York |
Aroas . . . Welcome to PIP! Of course you are accepted we are family . . . (ok singing that tune now) seriously . . . this is lovely bittersweet in its beauty and the rain is only nice to stand in when you have a hand to hold *smile* xxoo |
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Sunshine
Administrator
Member Empyrean
since 1999-06-25
Posts 63354Listening to every heart |
Welcome to Passions! You're going to enjoy your time around here. Any questions, just click on a Moderator's name, and they'll be glad to help! Karilea - if I whisper, will you listen? |
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Seymour Tabin Member Empyrean
since 1999-07-07
Posts 31720Tamarac Fla |
Aroas, Welcome and I enjoyed the read. |
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Susan Caldwell Member Rara Avis
since 2002-12-27
Posts 8348Florida |
Welcome to our wonderful world of poetry! Please check your email for a special greeting from all of us here! Susan "if you won't let me fall for you |
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Aroas New Member
since 2003-10-28
Posts 8 |
everyone thnx, and i was suprised by the card, and i still like it ******************************************** Here a other poem i just wrote... You everytime when you smiled i looked at you everytime when you cried i looked at you While i'm sitting behind my desk writing a poem how i think of you how i feel for you while tears in my eyes i can't stop it i feel that much for you i can't stop thinking you're in my mind you're in my dreams it feels like i'm broken... i hear music sad music it makes me soft it makes me vulnerable While i put my feelings in a poem i release all of my anger and let happinnes inside forget al the bad moments looking around me and saying to myself WAKE UP!!! ...while i wake up i feel a smile on my head and saying happy thank God... it was just a dream about you... |
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Mistletoe Angel
since 2000-12-17
Posts 32816Portland, Oregon |
  (smiles) Oh Karim, I'm so happy you have introduced yourself, as we are all looking forward to get know more of your wonderful self and the wonderful poetry you write! This is a gorgeous debut, sweet friend, I love it! Welcome to Passions, sweet Karim, may you be inspired by all of us here as we will all be inspired by your lovely words! I can't wait to read more of your wondrous poetry, sweet friend, we all love youn so much! You have such a beautiful heart, thank you for sharing! May love and light always shine upon you! Love, Noah Eaton I don't need no proof when it comes to God and truth |
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Marge Tindal
since 1999-11-06
Posts 42384Florida's Foreverly Shores |
Aroas~ A warm welcome to this wonderful circle of poets and friends~ *Huglets* ~*Marge*~ ~*When the heart grieves over what it has lost, |
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Aroas New Member
since 2003-10-28
Posts 8 |
thank you all :P i just want to say..at here i can release my feelings, and show others... most of them arent my life ...or they arent just made up... i go in to that person (perspective) and see,hear,feel what that person goes trough every movement ,every heart beat that goes with him/her...i also feel it... and sometimes i still feel it as like my own feelings are broken, so if you really want to feel my poems and "experience" them...then close your heart and concentrate on those words and read them twice...as more you read and concentrate you get more involved...and if the time comes then you will experience it (or already did) i have more poems...not written but waiting for a certain moment to be released on paper .i wrote this poem on a schooltrip (yes i wrote it in the bus :P ) A new way there we were in the bus happy talking to eachother talk about thing that happend and talk about whats going to happen with the sun shining i'm getting blinded and trying to some shadow and try to find a new way a way that will lead me to a place where i can be set free doing crazy and weird things because no one will know me on my search to a new way... [K.Khan] |
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Suetang Member Ascendant
since 2001-03-07
Posts 5187Melbourne, Australia |
Hello Karim I really enjoyed your first post and thank you for sharing your talent with us. Welcome to Passions, a place of warmth and comfort. Take care.......Sue I am in motion |
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JamesMichael Member Empyrean
since 1999-11-16
Posts 33336Kapolei, Hawaii, USA |
Enjoyed...James |
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vandana
since 1999-10-22
Posts 10463USA |
welcome to pasions enjoyed |
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