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Lonely Kite in the eastern sky.....
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Lonely Kite in the eastern sky..... |
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ambrish Member
since 2003-03-27
Posts 257India |
A lonely kite, In the eastern sky, Kite is alone, Sky is vacant, the empty sky. Riding on the wind, Kite is floating, is drifting, Aimlessly heading somewhere, God knows where, nowhere, nowhere. A vagrant kite, in lonely sky, Clouds passing by, passing by, A lost kite, kite is astray, In enormous sky, blank sky. Wind is blowing, is flowing, Kite is sailing, is roving, Where it has to go, somewhere, May be nowhere, nowhere, That’s why it is drifting, With the wind turning n twisting. |
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inkedgoddess Member Rara Avis
since 2002-11-19
Posts 7392Ohio |
nice free image floating by |
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passing shadows Member Empyrean
since 1999-08-26
Posts 45577displaced |
a lonely write...I know the feeling |
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angelblueyes Member Elite
since 2003-07-19
Posts 2148Oklahoma |
I interpret this several different ways. Crystal |
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Earth Angel Member Empyrean
since 2002-08-27
Posts 40215Realms of Light |
Please pull me back! Your poem was so realistic that I felt as though I was truly that kite, aloft and adrift in the wild blue yonder! Wonderfully descriptive writing!   EA |
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JamesMichael Member Empyrean
since 1999-11-16
Posts 33336Kapolei, Hawaii, USA |
Nice descriptive writing...seems a shame that the Taliban in Afganistan would not allow the people the joy of flying a kite...James |
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Marge Tindal 
since 1999-11-06
Posts 42384Florida's Foreverly Shores |
Ambrish~ 'A vagrant kite, in lonely sky' I do like the idea of 'a vagrant kite'~ Your words are aloft~ *Huglets* ~*Marge*~ ~*When the heart grieves over what it has lost, |
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vandana
since 1999-10-22
Posts 10463USA |
enjoyed this  |
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