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Greeneyes

Member Rara Avis

since 2000-09-09

Posts 9903
In Your Poetic Mind

0 posted 2003-10-29 09:41 AM

A simple reflection

emerges to extend
thoughts    blowing
wind and stormy   seas,
distant horizons    just out of reach
   simple worth

times like this,
nothing softer,
nothing less will do

You awake,
living life,
sometimes in a static
between stations,
between  answers &
   white noise
hoping to find
ponderings,   of
each moment   each  silent each time

searching for,
something to hold
an indication this is where
   you want,    need to be

Fingers  of my soul
await   your   song,
like  hunger
they become my soul, &
words depart briefly
from my lips   &    allowing me to
shift deeper among my life,
wrapping my heart in layers

The palm of your hands
bleed    poetry,
speaking   of rain dancing,
and fallen hope   I can
recite each   line
trickle,   drop
    rolling softly,
falling   endlessly

       {yet}

    Hearing your words,
feeling your words,
stir my emotions  to be

beautiful
the main character

believe

Will the wind ever remember the names
it has blown in the past with
its crutch its old age and its widsom
it whispers no this won't be the last

Gentle Spirit
Member Patricius

since 2000-10-09

Posts 13989

1 posted 2003-10-29 09:43 AM

a slow sigh escapes me L~ God you write so beautifully and touch me so deeply with words.

sister...

Sunshine

Administrator

Member Empyrean

since 1999-06-25

Posts 63354
Listening to every heart

2 posted 2003-10-29 09:44 AM

and how many
characterizations
live within each of us
begging release,
wanting
to dance
in the rain?

Ah girl. Very good.

Greeneyes

Member Rara Avis

since 2000-09-09

Posts 9903
In Your Poetic Mind

3 posted 2003-10-29 09:44 AM

I just emailed you....LOL

too

Will the wind ever remember the names
it has blown in the past with
its crutch its old age and its widsom
it whispers no this won't be the last

Greeneyes

Member Rara Avis

since 2000-09-09

Posts 9903
In Your Poetic Mind

4 posted 2003-10-29 09:46 AM

Karilea~

I believe many do....each longing for the dance...

hugsssssss
Lauren~

Will the wind ever remember the names
it has blown in the past with
its crutch its old age and its widsom
it whispers no this won't be the last

Gentle Spirit
Member Patricius

since 2000-10-09

Posts 13989

5 posted 2003-10-29 09:48 AM

I knew hon, before I read the e.....
love you girl....you grace me with your friendship...and I THANK YOU dear one...

It's better than I could have planned..
it's made me who I am...
{Trace Adkins}

vandana

Member Patricius

since 1999-10-22

Posts 10463
USA

6 posted 2003-10-29 09:58 AM

one of your best

loved it

Cpat Hair

Member Patricius

since 2001-06-05

Posts 11793

7 posted 2003-10-29 02:07 PM

Fingers  of my soul
await   your   song,
like  hunger
they become my soul, &
words depart briefly
from my lips   &    allowing me to
shift deeper among my life,
wrapping my heart in layers

The palm of your hands
bleed    poetry,
speaking   of rain dancing,
and fallen hope   I can
recite each   line
trickle,   drop
    rolling softly,
falling   endlessly
you always amaze me.... and always capture more for the reader than I ever thought possible with mere words.. but words are never "mere" when you write..

lovely my friend..absolutely lovely

Krawdad
Member Elite

since 2001-01-03

Posts 2597

8 posted 2003-10-29 02:13 PM

Fascinating piece, L!
Enjoyed.
Worth several reads . . .
e

Janet Marie
Member Laureate

since 2000-01-22

Posts 18554

9 posted 2003-10-29 10:00 PM

words depart briefly
from my lips   &    allowing me to
shift deeper among my life,
wrapping my heart in layers

The palm of your hands
bleed    poetry,
speaking   of rain dancing,
and fallen hope   I can
recite each   line
trickle,   drop
    rolling softly,
falling   endlessly

======================================

stunning poetic exploration poetess Lauren.
ditto all that Ron said.

You're the color of the sky reflected in each store-front window pane ...
You're the whispering and the sighing of my tires in the rain.

J. Browne

Mistletoe Angel

Member Empyrean

since 2000-12-17

Posts 32816
Portland, Oregon

10 posted 2003-10-29 11:29 PM

(smiles) Oh Lauren, this is beautiful, sweet friend, may you always get the leading role and play Beautiful forever, yay, encore encore! (kiss on cheek) You will always be the star of your show, sweet friend, we all throw roses to you, we all love you so much! You have such a beautiful heart, sweet Lauren, thank you for sharing!

May love and light always shine upon you!

Love,
Noah Eaton

I don't need no proof when it comes to God and truth
I can see the sun set and I perceive

***Live***

Aenimal
Member Rara Avis

since 2002-11-18

Posts 7350
the ass-end of space

11 posted 2003-10-29 11:35 PM

this what i meant as i was talking to Ron earlier..art you write art

Greeneyes

Member Rara Avis

since 2000-09-09

Posts 9903
In Your Poetic Mind

12 posted 2003-10-30 10:12 PM

Muwwwaaahhhsss and HUGSSSSS
Thanks Kindly.....

Lauren~

Will the wind ever remember the names
it has blown in the past with
its crutch its old age and its widsom
it whispers no this won't be the last

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