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KoKo
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Inside the shadow's shadow

0 posted 2003-10-28 09:08 PM


"I'm sorry,
The line's busy.
Please try again later
When she's ready
To be open
And vulnerable
To any
And all
Calls."

© Copyright 2003 Lauren - All Rights Reserved
PsychoticBunni
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since 2003-10-03
Posts 162
Mythical Atlantis
1 posted 2003-10-28 09:13 PM


yea. i know how u feel. I hate technology.

Meg

Meg- And the Texan pushed the Mexican out of the plane and screamed, "Long live the ALAMO!!!!!!!!!"

KoKo
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Inside the shadow's shadow
2 posted 2003-10-28 09:14 PM


LOL, this actually had nothing to do with technology
PsychoticBunni
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Mythical Atlantis
3 posted 2003-10-28 09:24 PM


oh...

Meg- And the Texan pushed the Mexican out of the plane and screamed, "Long live the ALAMO!!!!!!!!!"

pandonov
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since 2003-10-03
Posts 478
b/w conscience and insolence
4 posted 2003-10-28 09:32 PM


this one is very original. i definately enjoyed the read

Aenimal
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the ass-end of space
5 posted 2003-10-28 09:40 PM


witty ..grins
please hang up, and try you're BS elsewhere..this is NOT a recording

[This message has been edited by Aenimal (10-28-2003 09:41 PM).]

JamesMichael
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Kapolei, Hawaii, USA
6 posted 2003-10-31 04:17 AM


Timing is important...James
1slick_lady
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standing on a shadow's lace
7 posted 2003-10-31 04:32 AM


waiting waiting on the line....h
KristieSue
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8 posted 2003-10-31 09:58 AM


lol you get those calls too, huh?

Ya know what they say.  Curiosity salted the snail.

Earth Angel
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Realms of Light
9 posted 2003-10-31 10:27 AM


OMG, exactly! Very clever write!

I do so know what you mean! I've been there! ~ but fortunately, I am ready to receive all calls! ~ and may you soon be in that place as well!

That was KoKo Kute!

Loves 'n hugs!
Happy Halloween!
Linda
P.S. No tricks! Just treats!



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10 posted 2003-10-31 02:07 PM


Love it! Funny and not so funny, all in one tight little package. Good work!

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KristieSue
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11 posted 2003-10-31 03:51 PM


btw, definitely not flea dung :-)~~

Ya know what they say.  Curiosity salted the snail.

Kellie_Cantrell
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since 2002-05-22
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12 posted 2003-10-31 05:02 PM


I liked this, because of how true it is, I like how you conveyed the feeling of not being able to to through to someone in such a creative and original way!

Good Job!
-Kellie

                   Love,
             xXx~*KELLIE*~xXx
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Mistletoe Angel
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13 posted 2003-10-31 10:47 PM




"If you'd like to make a call,
please hang up and try again.
If you need help, hang up,
and then re-dial your operator!
If you'd like to make a call,
please hang up and try again.
If you need help, hang up,
and then re-dial your operator!
BEEP BEEP BEEP BEEP BEEP"

I know this feeling ever so much, sweet friend, sometimes it just has to be left temporarily out of order! (sad sigh) I send angel hugs your way, sweet friend, God Bless You, we all love you so much! You have such a beautiful heart, sweet Lauren, thank you for sharing!



May love and light always shine upon you!

Love,
Noah Eaton

I don't need no proof when it comes to God and truth
I can see the sun set and I perceive

***Live***

BluesSerenade
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since 2001-10-23
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By the Seaside
14 posted 2003-10-31 10:53 PM


And that would be not any time too soon!!
My line isn't busy, it's dead.  

Very clever write, KoKo~

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