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dosePoet
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since 2003-10-31

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0 posted 2003-10-31 08:18 PM

My name is dosePoet and when I found this site I thought it would be a great place to share some of my poetry. While I am currently a freelance web designer, my true love is writing and I have been writing all my life. The poem I am sharing here is actually number 2 of 7 poems that make up a complete beautiful love story that I recently experienced. This whole story and more poetry can be read at www.dosepoet.com

Blackout

Darkness surrounds my existence
As your world is
Dark.
Excitement so rich with
Frustration.
My imagination left lonely
As I long for you.
What you do
To me
You might never know.

Sleepless day leaves abandoned night.
Our night.
Our mystery to become reality
Lost.
Found in another day's journey
To your soul.
To your heart
Where I long to be
Where I belong.

"Blackout" from your dosePoet

Any feedback is extremely welcome!
www.dosepoet.com

Sunshine

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since 1999-06-25

Posts 63354
Listening to every heart

1 posted 2003-10-31 08:20 PM

Welcome to Passions, Poet. You've found a very unique site, I do hope you will stick around, become one with our community, and above all, enjoy yourself!

Karilea - if I whisper, will you listen?

Mistletoe Angel

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since 2000-12-17

Posts 32816
Portland, Oregon

2 posted 2003-10-31 08:29 PM

(smiles) Yay! This is a wonderful debut and a great start to a wonderful poetic saga, sweet friend, I can't wait till you post the other six parts, yay! Welcome to Passions, sweet friend, may you be inspired by all of us here as we will all be inspired by your lovely words! I can't wait to read more of your wondrous poetry, sweet friend, we all love you so much, and be sure to check your E-mail for a very special greeting from all of us here at Passions just for you! You have such a beautiful heart, thank you for sharing!

May love and light always shine upon you!

Love,
Noah Eaton

I don't need no proof when it comes to God and truth
I can see the sun set and I perceive

***Live***

Enchantress
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since 2001-08-14

Posts 35113
Canada eh.

3 posted 2003-10-31 08:41 PM

WELCOME TO PASSIONS!
Much enjoyed your entrance post...
I look forward to seeing more of your work.
~Smiles & Hugs, Nancy~

~Time has cast a spell on you,
So you won't ever forget me~

Marge Tindal

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since 1999-11-06

Posts 42384
Florida's Foreverly Shores

4 posted 2003-10-31 11:02 PM

Welcome to PiP ... you'll find a lovely poetic circle of friends here.

Pull up a seat and light a candle ... we'll keep you reading into the night~

Enjoyed your entrance and looking forward to more~
*Huglets*
~*Marge*~

~*When the heart grieves over what it has lost,
the spirit rejoices over what it has left.
- Sufi epigram
noles1@totcon.com

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