Open Poetry #29 |
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iwannarime22 Junior Member
since 2003-10-25
Posts 19Rogers, Arkansas |
My friend, I need you now- Please take me by the hand. Stand by me in my hour of need, Take time to understand. Take my hand, dear friend, And lead me from this place. Chase away my doubts and fears, Wipe the tears from off my face. Friend, I cannot stand alone. I need your hand to hold, The warmth of your gentle touch In my world that's grown so cold. Please be a friend to me And hold me day by day. Because with your loving hand in mine, I know we'll find the way. |
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KoKo Senior Member
since 2003-02-15
Posts 995Inside the shadow's shadow |
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PsychoticBunni Member
since 2003-10-03
Posts 162Mythical Atlantis |
ok! I'll be ur friend. lol Meg- And the Texan pushed the Mexican out of the plane and screamed, "Long live the ALAMO!!!!!!!!!" |
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EagleScorpion Senior Member
since 2000-03-08
Posts 1644Here, Now, Forever |
poems like this are so cute and there is much truth in these thoughts you have wrought. friends may be the only ones to keep you sane!! (so pick good ones!!! ) |
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WildPoet Member
since 2003-11-10
Posts 205California |
Very smooth, nice flow. Makes me want to help! Thanks WildPoet |
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Mistletoe Angel
since 2000-12-17
Posts 32816Portland, Oregon |
(smiles) God Bless You, sweet friend, know you always have friends in your heart and we are all blessed to be your friends here in this poetry family, yay, I send angel friendship hugs your way, we all love you so much! You have such a beautiful heart, sweet Kim, thank you for sharing! May love and light always shine upon you! Love, Noah Eaton I don't need no proof when it comes to God and truth |
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SharaRose Member Elite
since 2003-07-19
Posts 2501Somewhere out there~ |
Sweet. Terri~ |
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passing shadows Member Empyrean
since 1999-08-26
Posts 45577displaced |
it would be hard for any friend to deny such a beautiful request |
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