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exhale
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0 posted 2003-11-12 10:36 PM


like glass
so fragile
don't breathe
she might
fall apart
like glass
so transparent
look closely
you might see right
through her
like glass
blocking you out
keeping you away
like glass
don't breathe
she might fall apart

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bslicker
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1 posted 2003-11-12 11:00 PM


very well said
good write
bernie

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2 posted 2003-11-12 11:21 PM






(smiles) This is wonderfully expressed, sweet friend, the last thing one can do is make another fall apart, hearts are more fragile one may think, God Bless You, we all love you so much! You have such a beautiful heart, sweet Chelsea, thank you for sharing!



May love and light always shine upon you!

Love,
Noah Eaton


I don't need no proof when it comes to God and truth
I can see the sun set and I perceive

***Live***

[This message has been edited by Mistletoe Angel (11-12-2003 11:22 PM).]

passing shadows
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3 posted 2003-11-13 03:42 AM


if you knew me, I would think this was about me
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