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JamesMichael
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0 posted 2003-10-28 06:49 PM


Once Upon A Time In California

Often I have wondered
why my marriage didn't last.
After some thought I
decided we were never
a good match.
Who's fault was that,
hers or mine...
I'd say we both screwed
up in California
once upon a time.

JamesLee
October28
2003

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SEA
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1 posted 2003-10-28 06:52 PM


aww....dang, that is so sad
JamesMichael
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2 posted 2003-10-28 06:58 PM


Tell me about it Sea...seems overly simpilistic to just say we weren't a good match...I also remember that I was not open to receive love...James
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3 posted 2003-10-28 07:01 PM


we learn, we grow....seems to me you are sure open to love now, that has to count for something
Enchantress
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Canada eh.
4 posted 2003-10-28 07:05 PM



Ahhh James.... come here...

~Time has cast a spell on you,
  So you won't ever forget me~

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5 posted 2003-10-28 07:08 PM


nice
JamesMichael
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6 posted 2003-10-28 07:11 PM


Thank you for the nice thoughts Sea...yes I am definately open for love now.
Enchantress you reminded me of something I heard on Dr. Laura's earlier today...a man called and told her he was afraid to receive love...Dr. Laura told him to go to his wife and tell her he was afraid and ask her to hold him...reminded me of the way I was many years ago...James

JamesMichael
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7 posted 2003-10-28 07:12 PM


Thank you vandana for the nice response...I appreciate it...James
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8 posted 2003-10-28 07:16 PM


As well as you've learned to write love poems, I would say that it had to be a mutual problem.  James, continue to search, and find the one that fits the glove.
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