Open Poetry #29 |
My Dreamworld |
KoKo Senior Member
since 2003-02-15
Posts 995Inside the shadow's shadow |
It smells like burnt feathers Like a chicken, Never plucked, Cooked. It's the end of time, And the beginning of timeless ways And money does not exist. Organized religion Becomes unorganized- The way it was meant To Be. Schools are teaching the ways Of REAL life, and how many Are not rich, And cannot live On their expert food pyramid. Like the rich ever did anyway? Stars don't die, and more are born Factories don't infect And ducks' quacks DO echo. (I don't think they ever knew They were special.) Racism is only a memory And the same with Every other ugly word And concept (But That means "Ugly" does not exist And therefor, neither does This paragraph.) Dreams come true, And wishes are fullfilled, Because they are pure And untainted By evil. But, this dream, My dream, Does not come true Because This Is not My Dreamworld. [This message has been edited by KoKo (10-28-2003 12:07 AM).] |
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pandonov Member
since 2003-10-03
Posts 478b/w conscience and insolence |
neither is mine, yet would be nice for some change(just for a while though) |
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KoKo Senior Member
since 2003-02-15
Posts 995Inside the shadow's shadow |
Thanks. I appreciate the read and the comment |
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pandonov Member
since 2003-10-03
Posts 478b/w conscience and insolence |
any time |
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Fire Fairy Junior Member
since 2003-10-22
Posts 43Australia |
Its is your dreamworld sweetheart. We are the creators, and you can make a difference in this life. I was convinced I had to conform to this earthy illusion, yet I broke free, and now I fly on the wings of connectedness and wisdom. In my world of enchantment, I bring a taste of wonder to this sometimes stone cold reality. Beautifully written... you're a very intelligent person and your views are interesting to ponder upon. |
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Mary Ann Member
since 2003-04-23
Posts 111 |
This is a lovely write I admire your dreamworld and wish also that reality was more like it... God bless, ~MA~ |
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