Open Poetry #29 |
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Praying Twilight Tears |
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Professor Gloom Member Elite
since 2000-07-23
Posts 3082of Depression |
Penny’s Story Act 1 scene 3.1 Curtain rises to a hospital room, a middle-aged Priest kneels beside bed of young girl, the room begins to dim as the light from the window fades What sinner dost prevail, That drives life away so frail, Who knowingly done would so coldly do, None can understand, Why such evil is in man; Yet blessing is done and forgiveness too. the room has dimmed till the only light is from hospital equipment and a small lamp Praying twilight tears, Touched each time through the years, Seeing more often dulls no tragedy This soul need keeping, Save the life slowly seeping, And duties had other places to be, With candles to light, And preparations of night, Tending to the pains of reality. Enter stage right, Quickly though doorway, Tall Shadowy man Shepard tend you sheep This lambs safety I will keep, Through the night To morn’s light, Her spirit will stay Till next coming of the day; Exit Priest stage right, reluctantly through doorway the other turns out the lamp and sits in a chair enveloped my shadows Gloom |
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Susan Caldwell Member Rara Avis
since 2002-12-27
Posts 8348Florida |
![]() Bravo! "if you won't let me fall for you |
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Sunshine
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Member Empyrean
since 1999-06-25
Posts 63354Listening to every heart |
You've got me wanting to add prayers to see her safely through. You've made Penny come alive in your words. |
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Lotus Breeze Member
since 2003-09-06
Posts 112 |
I follow your word, enjoy story, hoping it not stay sad |
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SharaRose Member Elite
since 2003-07-19
Posts 2501Somewhere out there~ |
So sad. :'( Love, Terri~ ![]() |
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