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Open Poetry #29

Being Stalked

Sadelite
Member Elite

since 2003-10-11

Posts 2519

0 posted 2003-10-28 12:27 PM

Being stalked.

I had greater faith in you
in your trust
to be left    all alone
and to   know
all would be
right.
Now
you stalk
my every   word
every place  I’ve been,
every thought I have
I feel naked being stalked.

I don’t like it
Being stalked
By your silent nagging
lack of manner
I’ve only tried
To love
You
Better.
But you only
Stalk
With deafness.
Suffocating deafness.

Shall I bother
To
Even
Talk?

Fire Fairy
Junior Member

since 2003-10-22

Posts 43
Australia

1 posted 2003-10-28 01:12 AM

I really liked this one!

Sadelite
Member Elite

since 2003-10-11

Posts 2519

2 posted 2003-10-28 02:18 AM

Why, thank you Fire Fairy. I'm glad you enjoyed it. I noticed that you are fairly new to piptalk. I'd like to welcome you to our family. I look forward to reading some of your postings. Happy writing to you!
Sadelite

Professor Gloom
Member Elite

since 2000-07-23

Posts 3082
of Depression

3 posted 2003-10-28 05:03 AM

Thoughts prevail
Sent with understanding, undemanding,

Shall I bother
To
Even
Talk?

with poetry like this,
Words and Thoughts are clear

Gloom

passing shadows
Member Empyrean

since 1999-08-26

Posts 45577
displaced

4 posted 2003-10-28 05:08 AM

sometimes you don't need to talk...just walk

Sadelite
Member Elite

since 2003-10-11

Posts 2519

5 posted 2003-10-28 08:31 AM

Passing Shadow,
   Thanks for passing my way again for about the sixth or seventh time!  Walk?   It's an idea.   But i'm not much of a walker.
   Have a great day.
                        Sadelite

Sadelite
Member Elite

since 2003-10-11

Posts 2519

6 posted 2003-10-28 08:38 AM

Professor Gloom,
    Thank you for visiting.   I always enjoy
talking with you.  Thanks for your encouraging critique.  Someday i'll figure this poetry thing out.  I can use all the help i can get!  Stop in again some time.
                         Sadelight

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