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Aenimal
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the ass-end of space

0 posted 2003-10-27 10:40 PM


bound in the chains of
another day, imprisoned
by 'realities'

don't even ask..


[This message has been edited by Aenimal (10-27-2003 10:43 PM).]

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pandonov
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since 2003-10-03
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b/w conscience and insolence
1 posted 2003-10-27 10:53 PM


'realities', i highly recommend you Porcupine Tree and their latest album "in absentia" (of course thats in case if you don't listen to them already)
icebox
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since 2003-05-03
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in the shadows
2 posted 2003-10-27 11:01 PM


bridging worlds brings pain
crossing over frightens you
passion pays the toll

I don't ask, but I wish you well my friend.

KoKo
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since 2003-02-15
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Inside the shadow's shadow
3 posted 2003-10-27 11:29 PM


I won't ask, but I do understand.
Ratleader
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4 posted 2003-10-31 02:20 PM


Are we talking here about the pain inflicted by normals? Hate 'em!

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Cpat Hair
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5 posted 2003-10-31 02:24 PM


bound in chains of day
shackles chafe the tender skin
rough reality



Earth Angel
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Realms of Light
6 posted 2003-10-31 02:27 PM


You are the mighty and glorious Raphael! You have the power within you to break those chains to smithereens!

Sometimes, I just feel like giving you a nice hot cup of cocoa and a big comforting hug!

Peace, Love & Light,
Linda

Seymour Tabin
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Tamarac Fla
7 posted 2003-10-31 02:27 PM


Aenimal
Well you stired up a hornets nest. LOL

BluesSerenade
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By the Seaside
8 posted 2003-10-31 11:09 PM


Seems those chains that bind us are held together by the dark side of reality that traps us inside of ourselves.

Makes me wish I never passed go!!!

Mistletoe Angel
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9 posted 2003-10-31 11:29 PM




(sigh) Yes, break those god-forsakin' chains! (big hugggssssssss) You are too strong to get binded down, sweet friend, God Bless You, we all love you so much! You have such a beautiful heart, sweet Raphael, thank you for sharing!



May love and light always shine upon you!

Love,
Noah Eaton

I don't need no proof when it comes to God and truth
I can see the sun set and I perceive

***Live***

Severn
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since 1999-07-17
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10 posted 2003-11-01 01:37 AM


well damn, don't you just sound like me...that means I get to say 'snap out of it, Raph' and then go away sniggering...heh,

hugs...

K

passing shadows
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displaced
11 posted 2003-11-01 03:16 AM


Raph, I feel the same way too sometimes
littlewing
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since 2003-03-02
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New York
12 posted 2003-11-02 11:45 AM


dont even ask?

you told . . .

yes reality, as you very well know
umm SUCKS . . .
BUT?
within that reality lies a window
open it please
and sneak away
*smile*
xxoo

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