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Beyond Me
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Beyond Me |
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ThisDiamond Member Rara Avis
since 2002-02-22
Posts 9353Michigan, USA |
Beyond me; Anticipation of the glittering white As if to play in video within my thoughts So joyously chocolate paws in powdered sugar And engines roar beneath you just ahead The cold comes, and it will not cease I look upon ice sculptures in the leaves Hanging like bangles from the trees My shadow lengthens toward the afternoon The quiet is welcome and endless across the meadow Deer stand along the edges of shy, finding sparse graze Meeting my gaze My fingers are cold...it's not the same sky Perhaps the day has found itself so shy Just cabin fever... Yearning for the fireplace, thinking of a certain face Time could pass away, forgetting the abandoned path The colors that have walked us...just as emotions talked us through the curves The smell of pine is pretty in the new snow, clean Undiscovered without print, the winds blow My heart beats in the rhythms of extraordinary things Dreams that reoccur with silver wings The sweeping up to unbound joy, rummaging the everlast without a practiced ploy Walking toward the warm to settle differences, Spiriting with pure intention truly gold The tongue and groove that builds this home still sweet once cut and polished The steps are just as warm, And would you, I sit down And remember how I love you. Copyright Kkh 10/27/03 [This message has been edited by ThisDiamond (10-28-2003 07:01 AM).] |
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jwesley Member Rara Avis
since 2000-04-30
Posts 7563Spring, Texas |
Ahh...and what an ending...neat to see you tie it all to the end, my friend...mucho enjoyed... jwesley |
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inkedgoddess Member Rara Avis
since 2002-11-19
Posts 7392Ohio |
I look upon ice sculptures in the leaves Hanging like bangles from the trees My shadow lengthens toward the afternoon The quiet is welcome and endless across the meadow Deer stand along the edges so pretty, as much as i dread its coming, too soon, too soon |
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wandering glider Senior Member
since 2001-04-04
Posts 501aloft |
beyond you? no I think you are too close to it enjoy the season let it guide you |
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wandering glider Senior Member
since 2001-04-04
Posts 501aloft |
And, enjoyed the sounds of this. |
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garysgirl  
since 2002-09-29
Posts 19237Florida, USA |
Beautiful writing, my friends. This is a little different style for you, but it still lookls very good on you, Lady.  Hugs  Ethel |
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passing shadows Member Empyrean
since 1999-08-26
Posts 45577displaced |
love the ending! |
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Sunshine
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Member Empyrean
since 1999-06-25
Posts 63354Listening to every heart |
Time could pass away, forgetting the abandoned path The colors that have walked us...just as emotions talked us through the curves The smell of pine is pretty in the new snow, clean Undiscovered without print, the winds blow ~*~ I found this passage extremely welcoming even if the winds blow, and the snowflakes swirl Thank you, Kathleen. |
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s1nfully_1nn0c3nt Senior Member
since 2003-10-26
Posts 1105Watertown, NY |
NICE ENDING AND GREAT POEM LOVED IT~!~ |
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Magnus
since 2001-10-10
Posts 14135South Carolina, USA |
Kay, anything you write looks good on you, and this is no exception... Smile You! |
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