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Atrum Mortalis
New Member

since 2003-10-28

Posts 9

0 posted 2003-10-28 08:34 PM

Rain in my black hazed eyes,
Blood stinging in my belief of lies,
Twisted travesty and no freezing feeling in my soul,
Life has lambasted and lacerated me into something whole,

Its this pain,
It’s this disdain,
That helps me breathe,
Its this rage,
It’s this hate,
That keeps me from a fatal fate
It’s this depression,
It’s this aggression,
That keeps me from deathbed,

Sin in my perfect ears,
Apathy gripping me in my deepest fears,
Sweet bitter lies make me compromise,
Life has lambasted and lacerated me into something whole.

PsychoticBunni
Member

since 2003-10-03

Posts 162
Mythical Atlantis

1 posted 2003-10-28 08:43 PM

welcome. welcome. great poem. it's so true that sometimes anger is necessary to live.
keep posting those great works. I will finally be rivaled. lol. j/k.

Meg

Meg- And the Texan pushed the Mexican out of the plane and screamed, "Long live the ALAMO!!!!!!!!!"

Wind

Member Elite

since 2002-10-12

Posts 2981

2 posted 2003-10-28 08:48 PM

awsome start here. You've got some skills and I'll look forward to more of them

What about China? Have you seen the Great Wall?
All walls are great, if the roof doesn't fall.
-yorke/bjork

Pearle
New Member

since 2003-10-21

Posts 7

3 posted 2003-10-28 08:51 PM

Nicely written, Atrum ... ->>>> roses

KoKo
Senior Member

since 2003-02-15

Posts 995
Inside the shadow's shadow

4 posted 2003-10-28 08:54 PM

This sang to me...

Atrum Mortalis
New Member

since 2003-10-28

Posts 9

5 posted 2003-10-28 09:00 PM

thank you all. i write alot because well i have nothing better to do. I play guitar in metal band so most of these random poems will either end up on my demo im working on or in my files in my computer

Magnus

Member Laureate

since 2001-10-10

Posts 14135
South Carolina, USA

6 posted 2003-10-28 09:42 PM

an interesting write as well as a very
befitting pen name. Welcome to Passions.
No need to pull the plug yet, you are
doing just fine...a power packed piece.

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