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sunshinemc
Junior Member

since 2003-09-20

Posts 27

0 posted 2003-10-27 09:47 PM

To my mother...pouringjewels

My mother is a wonderful women
gentle, kind, and sweet
she is always giving to others
and yet, treated as a peice of meat

Beauty overcomes her
inside and out
constantly lending out her hand
trying to explain what shes all about.

Bad luck flows through her veins
sending her into tears
her smile slowly falls into a frown
constant betrayal from her peers

So kind hearted,
it hurts to see her depressed
trying her hardest to stay alive inside
and i see her giving it her best

Loosing her parents at a young age,
sunken into a hole from once a lover,
horrible treatment from co-workers,
as sent her into a lonley cover.

I try my hardest to keep the peace
but im a stupid young teen
I try my hardest to learn from her
she is so wise, and so keen.

Im counting my blessings
and sending out a plea
that one day my mother will be luckey and joyful
and always n forever, that way she'll be.

I love you and will always be here for you
xoxo

jwesley
Member Rara Avis

since 2000-04-30

Posts 7563
Spring, Texas

1 posted 2003-10-27 09:56 PM

I hope so to, my friend...have you shown this to your mother?? Lots of love a caring in here...

jwesley

wandering glider
Senior Member

since 2001-04-04

Posts 501
aloft

2 posted 2003-10-27 10:01 PM

but not without some luck
that she has a young admirer
who will be there with respect
and know enough to love her

Sunshine

Administrator

Member Empyrean

since 1999-06-25

Posts 63354
Listening to every heart

3 posted 2003-10-27 10:37 PM

Ok, ok, now I'm seeing the family thread it's way into passionate weave...

well done, little sunnyone...

wranx
Member Elite

since 2002-06-07

Posts 3689
Moved from a shack to a barn

4 posted 2003-10-27 11:24 PM

Hmmm, Stupid young teen, you say?

HA! I beg to differ young lady! You see your Mom as very few do, and give her the credit that is due her. (She did, after all raise two very special young women, with little help).

I love the write, and I love the sentiment.
And? I love YOU!

So glad that you posted this. She deserves it...and deserves you.

Uncle Ed

Greeneyes

Member Rara Avis

since 2000-09-09

Posts 9903
In Your Poetic Mind

5 posted 2003-10-27 11:38 PM

OMG this made me cry.....such a sweet wisdom you have....peace

Lauren~

Will the wind ever remember the names
it has blown in the past with
its crutch its old age and its widsom
it whispers no this won't be the last

littlewing
Member Rara Avis

since 2003-03-02

Posts 9655
New York

6 posted 2003-10-28 12:30 PM

Morgan . . .
what a beautiful soul you have
and such insight
Your mother is an extremely special
Lady and she deserves much happiness
Her heart shines through her words, as do yours, as do those of your uncle

Good to see you writing
Much impressed
xxoo

PouringJewels
Member

since 2003-09-18

Posts 158
Maryland

7 posted 2003-10-31 02:00 AM

Oh my, Oh my. My beautiful caring daughter. I just found your writing on page 9. I am so lucky to have you, and so sorry you have seen my pain. I try hard not to make you worry. I only want to protect you from pain. Uncle Ed and Susie replied to your poem, I had no idea this was here. I love you so much. This made me cry. We will be O.K.
Mom

PouringJewels
Member

since 2003-09-18

Posts 158
Maryland

8 posted 2003-10-31 02:57 AM

What would I do without you? Uncle Ed (Wranx)
said some outstanding words to you. We have him too.

ambrish
Member

since 2003-03-27

Posts 257
India

9 posted 2003-10-31 03:24 AM

Im counting my blessings
and sending out a plea
that one day my mother will be luckey and joyful
and always n forever, that way she'll be.

definitely she will as she has a daughter like u.

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