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Open Poetry #29

I Can Feel You Breathing

the_loner_23
Member Ascendant

since 2002-06-08

Posts 5479
Jacksonville, Florida, USA

0 posted 2003-10-28 10:40 PM

I lay beside you
Your asleep
But I am wide awake
I lay here
And watch you chest
Move up and down
I lay my hand
On your chest
Just so I
Can feel you breathing

Cold hands means a warm heart

SEA

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Member Seraphic

since 2000-01-18

Posts 22676
with you

1 posted 2003-10-28 10:53 PM

awww, very sweet....it's those times though, when we hear them snore from across the room....lol

ThunderMage
Senior Member

since 2002-06-20

Posts 812
Canada

2 posted 2003-10-28 10:55 PM

Snoring... something I do a lot of at night no doubt. LOL

What is life without poetry and adventure?
"Little sister" is just another way of saying "Guardian Angel"!

suthern

Member Seraphic

since 1999-07-29

Posts 20723
Louisiana

3 posted 2003-10-29 04:22 PM

I've done that... And it's worth the lack of sleep. *S* I like this, loner! *S*

KristieSue

Senior Member

since 2003-01-31

Posts 1460
PA, US

4 posted 2003-10-29 07:19 PM

definitely a favorite of mine...

Ya know what they say. Curiosity salted the snail.

Sadelite
Member Elite

since 2003-10-11

Posts 2519

5 posted 2003-10-30 01:02 AM

the_loner_23,
This lovely poem doesn't seem to fit your user name! Very simple. And the image, oh, so nice. Never can get enough of that one.
Thanks for sharing.
Sadelite

JamesMichael
Member Empyrean

since 1999-11-16

Posts 33336
Kapolei, Hawaii, USA

6 posted 2003-10-31 03:37 AM

Nice...James

ambrish
Member

since 2003-03-27

Posts 257
India

7 posted 2003-10-31 04:06 AM

a beautiful poem
passionate.

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