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inkedgoddess
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0 posted 2003-10-27 09:22 PM





Star sprinkled ocean

the sky is blinking

perpetual motion

my heart rides the sea


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Magnus
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1 posted 2003-10-27 09:25 PM


Red sky at night...sailor's delight...and
yes, sometimes sailors get lucky....

shortly romantic,  good images in my mind.

Aenimal
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2 posted 2003-10-27 09:26 PM


and we fishies love the sea
wandering glider
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aloft
3 posted 2003-10-27 09:28 PM


enjoy the light
enjoy the warmth
the stars are blinking
goodbye

inkedgoddess
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4 posted 2003-10-27 09:32 PM


lol...magnus , didnt think u caught that......lol

thanks raffi , yes we do

thanks wandering for wandering by with those words......

bklynboy
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5 posted 2003-10-28 11:32 PM


14 choice words....good job
littlewing
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6 posted 2003-10-29 12:10 PM


and as the tides rise . . .
you shall shine upon the shore
as a shell
sparkling facets
like a diamond dancing
remnant of the sea
you so forged
many years of swimming madness
searching tranquil sand step
slumber
I
see this for you
inked upon time
imprinted in dirt
your place of birth
shall be known to you
when the sea meets the shore

*smile*
soon Michele
xxoo

Happy Poet
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7 posted 2003-10-29 01:54 PM


Very good!!!
passing shadows
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8 posted 2003-10-30 04:24 AM


how much you said with so few words
Mistletoe Angel
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9 posted 2003-11-01 03:31 PM




(smiles) Oh Michele, this is beautiful, sweet friend, and may your heart forever swim on an abyss of stars and float deep into Andromeda, yay! (big hugggssssssss) God Bless You, sweet friend, we all love you so much! You have such a beautiful heart, sweet Michele, thank you for sharing!



May love and light always shine upon you!

Love,
Noah Eaton

I don't need no proof when it comes to God and truth
I can see the sun set and I perceive

***Live***

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