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inkedgoddess
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0 posted 2003-10-25 01:31 PM




Destitute eyes
longing to dream of you
when will you show yourself?

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passing shadows
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1 posted 2003-10-25 01:35 PM


I wonder that about mine too...sigh
MARK V SHELDON
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2 posted 2003-10-25 02:18 PM


...but dreams are so much nicer than reality, aren't they...?

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Sunshine
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3 posted 2003-10-25 02:24 PM



Goodness.  Looks like a lot of poets
are into brevity these days.  Looks
good...

Now.  Do it again.  

Midnitesun
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4 posted 2003-10-25 02:30 PM


bravo for brevity, especially when
it is so filling

Bill Charles
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5 posted 2003-10-25 03:22 PM


Michele - h'mmmmmm, soon I would hope, soon...

BC

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6 posted 2003-10-25 06:08 PM




(smiles) Oh Michele, this is gorgeous, sweet friend, your wish shall be granted and you will find all the comfort and love you desire forever emerge from silhouette! (smiles) God Bless You, sweet friend, we all love you so much! You have such a beautiful heart, sweet Michele, thank you for sharing!



May love and light always shine upon you!

Love,
Noah Eaton

I don't need no proof when it comes to God and truth
I can see the sun set and I perceive

***Live***

Seymour Tabin
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7 posted 2003-10-25 06:24 PM


inkedgoddess,
Interesting enjoyed.

bklynboy
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8 posted 2003-10-28 12:08 PM


Maybe he already has????
littlewing
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9 posted 2003-10-29 12:20 PM


when your not lookin and life really sucks, thats when . . .
*smile*
Michele . . . truly . . .
*nodding head*
see?
xxoo

inkedgoddess
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10 posted 2003-10-29 03:32 PM


maybe maybe maybe
well hit me on the head
maybe dont cut it..........lol

BluesSerenade
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11 posted 2003-10-30 07:22 PM


Don't you wish you could just make him up as you go?  Kind of like deleting them as you go!!     Oh that was bad!

Nice one girlie, girl~

vandana
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12 posted 2003-10-30 07:56 PM


enjoyed
Rdz9
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13 posted 2003-11-01 03:47 AM


Short... but heartfelt, enjoyed.
Rob

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Magnus
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14 posted 2003-11-01 03:20 PM


Not bad for so few stated words,  one could
write a novel from this.

jwesley
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15 posted 2003-11-01 03:27 PM


Huge question mark and opening to this isn't there???  Neat thought though and I kinda think like Blues ... make them up as you go...delete them (hee, hee) LOL ; seems to me a lot already do that though, huh...

Kool,

jwesley

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