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Elizabeth Santos
Member Rara Avis

since 1999-11-08

Posts 9269
Pennsylvania

0 posted 2003-10-27 05:21 PM

The Window

(Looking out Nan’s kitchen window)

What delights have lured this sparrow
To come land upon my tree?
On a twig so small and narrow
Perched in pure simplicity

The perfection of this treasure
That the morning would impart
Is a sight the eye can measure
By the joy within my heart

If my hand could brush the splendor
With the hues of nature’s bliss
Surely would my palette render
A sweet moment such as this

Elizabeth Santos
10/27/2003

Suetang
Member Ascendant

since 2001-03-07

Posts 5187
Melbourne, Australia

1 posted 2003-10-27 05:38 PM

An absolute masterpiece you have painted for us Elizabeth......beautiful!

Take care.......Sue

I am in motion
I am blue
Love is an ocean
I'm anchored in you
- Shawn Mullins

Seymour Tabin
Member Empyrean

since 1999-07-07

Posts 31720
Tamarac Fla

2 posted 2003-10-27 07:00 PM

Elizabeth
Pure and simple beauty.

Sunshine

Administrator

Member Empyrean

since 1999-06-25

Posts 63354
Listening to every heart

3 posted 2003-10-27 07:03 PM

I swear, God put that bird in your way JUST so you could write this poem. He gave you the perfect words for it, too.

Thank you, Elizabeth!

kayjay
Member Elite

since 2002-06-24

Posts 2015
Oregon

4 posted 2003-10-27 07:03 PM

Your palette renders other impressions, such your mastery of this simple scene. Thank you. KJ

Through rubble and trouble and dark of night
The yawn of a dawn will hasten the light

Mary Ann
Member

since 2003-04-23

Posts 111

5 posted 2003-10-28 05:51 AM

This is elegantly beautiful

Thank you for the lovely read..

God bless,

~MA~

JamesMichael
Member Empyrean

since 1999-11-16

Posts 33336
Kapolei, Hawaii, USA

6 posted 2003-10-28 06:44 PM

Very nice...James

GG
Member Elite

since 2002-12-03

Posts 3532
Lost in thought

7 posted 2003-10-28 07:35 PM

yes a masterpiece...
this is so beautiful and helps me look a little more on the simple beauties that I ignore so often...
Wow.. amazing.

Always, Alyssa

- And so it was that time stood still -
(blink, breathe, stand, fight)

Enchantress
Member Empyrean

since 2001-08-14

Posts 35113
Canada eh.

8 posted 2003-10-28 07:43 PM

Wonderful Lady Santos....much enjoyed!
Hugs~

~Time has cast a spell on you,
So you won't ever forget me~

vandana

Member Patricius

since 1999-10-22

Posts 10463
USA

9 posted 2003-10-28 07:53 PM

nice

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