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Goodknight
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0 posted 2003-10-25 05:20 PM


Colors all over
Mountains run far
Leaves and trails
Sights carom off minds
Rocks under foot
Soulful loot holds life
And time waits while the path is walked
And souls join to talk
No not talk but travel
The colors and the hills
With mountains to beckon and trails to hold
Much is told but little is heard
Words fail sights overwhelm
Wondering who is at the helm
But life sees and stores
The captured visions of gold
Purple red and yellow

[This message has been edited by Goodknight (10-25-2003 05:37 PM).]

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1 posted 2003-10-25 05:31 PM


Paul~
Just BEAUTIFUL~

'life sees and stores
The captured visions of gold'


Indeed !
*Huglets*
~*Marge*~

~*When the heart grieves over what it has lost,
the spirit rejoices over what it has left.
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2 posted 2003-10-25 05:32 PM


Hi Paul,  don't see ya often.

Autumn is an awesome time of year, isn't it?

But I hate all the leaf raking that I have
to do each year,  ugggggh!

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3 posted 2003-10-25 06:42 PM




(smiles) Awwwwwwwwww, I just love this, sweet friend, you paint all your gorgeous visions with rainbows and may those mountains always feel just like candy before your eyes! (big hugggsssssss) God Bless You, sweet friend, we all love you so much! You have such a beautiful heart, sweet Paul, thank you for sharing!



May love and light always shine upon you!

Love,
Noah Eaton

I don't need no proof when it comes to God and truth
I can see the sun set and I perceive

***Live***

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4 posted 2003-10-25 10:08 PM


Paul...Sometimes, it is true, you just have to absorb what you see.  I'm so glad you did that and then wrote of it here.  Fall colors are so beautiful in many places!  Hugs!
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5 posted 2003-10-25 10:34 PM


It sure is perty ain't it...I love this time of year!!! Very nice to read!! Loved this.
Terri~

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6 posted 2003-10-25 11:14 PM


Paul you have captured the autumn colours beautifully!
Wonderful to read you once again!
~Smiles & Hugs, Nancy~

~Time has cast a spell on you,
  So you won't ever forget me~

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7 posted 2003-10-26 12:01 PM


well done, appreciate your colorful write


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8 posted 2003-10-26 01:21 AM


and I can close my eyes and see them all
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