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ThisDiamond
Member Rara Avis

since 2002-02-22

Posts 9353
Michigan, USA

0 posted 2003-10-25 03:12 PM

The wind does not merely blow, as its wisdom pervades
Softly crumbling defenses of great mountains, persuades
Leaving lovingly etched on the hard face of facts
In caress to be felt long beyond breezed refracts

In the instance of living, what has been should be then
While the float and the stirring comes and goes, been again
Without even a heart sound to disturb our together
Sent to you every breath, a proverbial feather

Not a gale nor howl, neither hardest nor fierce
But a gentle adventure void of probing or pierce
Through your thoughts to discover a lament of the soul
In the wrapping of wishes, gold as bells spelled fall knoll

Could it be the for real seems to conquer so pale
Passing through hardest granite, lifting light what is frail
So un-fearfully given as a kiss still beseeched
To the winds of your heart, and the depths I have reached

Copyright Kkh 10/25/03

[This message has been edited by ThisDiamond (10-25-2003 06:53 PM).]

Sunshine

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since 1999-06-25

Posts 63354
Listening to every heart

1 posted 2003-10-25 03:51 PM

Not a gale or a howl neither hardest nor fierce
But a gentle adventure void of probing or pierce

~*~

Shhhh....like a whisper....

Kathleen, this is lovely. Thank you so much for sharing your talents.

Magnus

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since 2001-10-10

Posts 14135
South Carolina, USA

2 posted 2003-10-25 05:07 PM

In this,  I perceive you are making both
a statement and a plea.  It has something of
a quaint feel to it.  I also sense you may
have struggled a little with it...  Hang in
there kid...

Seymour Tabin
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since 1999-07-07

Posts 31720
Tamarac Fla

3 posted 2003-10-25 05:21 PM

ThisDiamond,
Well done, enjoyed the read.

Mistletoe Angel

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since 2000-12-17

Posts 32816
Portland, Oregon

4 posted 2003-10-25 06:58 PM

(sigh) You always write straight from the heart, sweet friend, this sure persuaded e of your gist for wonderful writing, God Bless You, we all love you so much! You have such a beautiful heart, sweet Kathleen, thank you for sharing!

May love and light always shine upon you!

Love,
Noah Eaton

I don't need no proof when it comes to God and truth
I can see the sun set and I perceive

***Live***

passing shadows
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since 1999-08-26

Posts 45577
displaced

5 posted 2003-10-26 02:44 AM

you are a very deep lady

Patricia
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since 2003-04-06

Posts 2160
Missouri

6 posted 2003-10-26 06:54 AM

Very lovely, TD. Your words shall stay with me today for a bit of thought and ponder.

Patricia

Magnus

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since 2001-10-10

Posts 14135
South Carolina, USA

7 posted 2003-10-26 10:19 AM

Maybe, if I read this about twice more,  I
would not be so ignorant a fool....for as I
read each line,  a light comes to me,  and
I say to myself,  most humbly....is but
the breeze of a poetess,  flowing gently
upon my mind....feel it,  savor it....for it
is simply said...  most divine!!

garysgirl

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since 2002-09-29

Posts 19237
Florida, USA

8 posted 2003-10-26 10:58 AM

In the instance of living, what has been should be then
While the float and the stirring comes and goes, been again
Without even a heart sound to disturb our together
Sent to you every breath, a proverbial feather

Kathleen, this is stunningly beautiful.
I love your writing, sweet lady. :heart;
Hugs

Ethel

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