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ctowen
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0 posted 2003-10-24 02:31 PM


The ease from light
a quieting moment
arresting sight
for the eye's enjoyment
settling down
seeping from open skies
echoing sound
as reality cries
before dreams come
beating down distant doors
silence, this drum
as the night gently pours ...

nightfalls

One's outlook can be another's expression.
  

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Gentle Spirit
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1 posted 2003-10-24 02:38 PM


excellent images of the falling night you let us see through your eyes.  Very well done...
Darren
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2 posted 2003-10-24 03:10 PM


I enjoyed this, thanks for sharing.
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3 posted 2003-10-24 03:44 PM


Craig~

this is so beautiful, and so peaceful....lovely images....always hoping night falls gently for you...
Lauren~

Will the wind ever remember the names
it has blown in the past with
its crutch its old age and its widsom
it whispers no this won't be the last

passing shadows
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4 posted 2003-10-25 01:59 PM


I've been in that moment a lot
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5 posted 2003-10-25 07:13 PM




(sigh) Oh Craig, this is beautifully tranquil, sweet friend, night can certainly bring comfort to ones heart without feeling lost, God Bless You, we all love you so much! You have such a beautiful heart, sweet Craig, thank you for sharing!



May love and light always shine upon you!

Love,
Noah Eaton

I don't need no proof when it comes to God and truth
I can see the sun set and I perceive

***Live***

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Gaia
6 posted 2003-10-25 09:20 PM


this write flows gently down the blue screen
Duncan
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7 posted 2003-10-26 12:17 PM


"before dreams come
beating down distant doors
silence, this drum
as the night gently pours ..."

With appreciation for those nights...very well done.

meteoraLP
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8 posted 2003-10-26 12:28 PM


i always greatly enjoy reading your poems.  
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