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Open Poetry #29

Know the smile

Lotus Breeze
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since 2003-09-06

Posts 112

0 posted 2003-10-25 12:35 PM

Somewhere you elsewhere
Being the old lonely man,
Do you know I care,
Wanting to make understand,
I have smile to share
Take from my lips when you can
Smiling lips wait for you here

JamesMichael
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since 1999-11-16

Posts 33336
Kapolei, Hawaii, USA

1 posted 2003-10-25 12:39 PM

Smiling lips are good...thank you Lotus...James

Sunshine

Administrator

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since 1999-06-25

Posts 63354
Listening to every heart

2 posted 2003-10-25 08:39 AM

Lotus, this is lovely. An old man, let alone a young man, would enjoy the show of your smile. Thank you for sharing this.

Marge Tindal

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since 1999-11-06

Posts 42384
Florida's Foreverly Shores

3 posted 2003-10-25 12:19 PM

LotusBreeze~
I so look forward to a penning from you~

'I have smile to share
Take from my lips when you can'

I just adore this thought~
*Huglets*
~*Marge*~

~*When the heart grieves over what it has lost,
the spirit rejoices over what it has left.
- Sufi epigram
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passing shadows
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since 1999-08-26

Posts 45577
displaced

4 posted 2003-10-25 01:19 PM

beautiful writing

Lotus Breeze
Member

since 2003-09-06

Posts 112

5 posted 2003-10-26 08:41 AM

All very kind in reply to my poetry, I thank very much. Make friendly here.

Gentle Spirit
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since 2000-10-09

Posts 13989

6 posted 2003-10-31 03:15 PM

I enjoyed the sincerity felt in these words. Very well done.

KristieSue

Senior Member

since 2003-01-31

Posts 1460
PA, US

7 posted 2003-10-31 03:55 PM

this was beautiful

Ya know what they say. Curiosity salted the snail.

Kellie_Cantrell
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since 2002-05-22

Posts 1667
New York

8 posted 2003-10-31 04:40 PM

This was very sweet and delicate, I really enjoyed this poem!

Love,
xXx~*KELLIE*~xXx
*My poetry website
http://www.freewebs.com/poettree/

Lotus Breeze
Member

since 2003-09-06

Posts 112

9 posted 2003-11-01 11:47 AM

I happy and thank for kind words given

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