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JamesMichael
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0 posted 2003-10-31 04:31 AM


Exciting

Her voice as silky
as an angels choir.
Her feminine qualities deposited
in all the right locations.
Having all the delicacies
that I admire in a woman.
Her presence exciting
me to provacative titilations.

JamesLee
October31
2003

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nakdthoughts
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Between the Lines
1 posted 2003-10-31 05:56 AM


Well..that is exciting JamesM..



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Spiros Zafiris
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2 posted 2003-10-31 07:15 AM


..JamesMichael../\..loving words; very nice..


../\..Spiros


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In Your Poetic Mind
3 posted 2003-11-01 11:01 AM


you write romance & desire very lovingly....


Lauren~

Will the wind ever remember the names
it has blown in the past with
its crutch its old age and its widsom
it whispers no this won't be the last

Mistletoe Angel
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4 posted 2003-11-01 11:35 AM




(smiles) Oh James, this is beautiful, sweet friend, this made me smile as all your wonderful poetry does! (big hugggsssssssss) God Bless You, sweet friend, may her voice forever bring music to your heart, we all love you so much! You have such a beautiful heart, sweet James, thank you for sharing!



May love and light always shine upon you!

Love,
Noah Eaton

I don't need no proof when it comes to God and truth
I can see the sun set and I perceive

***Live***

Seymour Tabin
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Tamarac Fla
5 posted 2003-11-01 11:39 AM


James,
Good write, enjoyed the read.

J. K. Mitchell
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6 posted 2003-11-01 11:58 AM


Quite simply excellent.

"Cuidado con mi corazon."--R. Martin

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